Nicely formatted with a hot cover (and other surprises throughout) you should check out the free preview here: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/368837
And due to the surprises inside, I recommend reading it on a Kindle for maximum enjoyment!
Let me know what you think of the cover, the story, or anything else you'd like to see at Sex Powers University in the comments!
P.F. Dee
I first came across your work on smashwords and have read every story you've ever written available on their website. I've recently had the pleasure of reading this latest piece of work and found myself bound to post this comment and tell you how utterly fantastic it is. Honestly. I have read a lot of stories...thousands....and many along a similar story line and theme (Salamando Flames work for example). I am especially a fan of your Drakes Cheerleaders Incident story, however this latest piece of work is simply of another level. It is utterly fantastic. What I especially love about it is the subtle and slow teasing and build up, too many stories out there have the character engaging in full hardcore sex within the first 3 pages, where's the fun in that? I'd quite happily read 3,000 pages of your work and not ever read an actual sex scene.
ReplyDeleteThe way you set up a scenario and how you introduce the characters is brilliant. Even right down to the scene with Professor Zadora and the concept of a willing partcipant and her tricks with the "truth detector", your stories go beyond sex to a level of social psychology that is just fascinating.
I EAGERLY await the next chapter of this, please continue this story, I could read your work forever. Let me also say that given the quality of this story I think you're selling yourself short with the price. It may seem silly of me to mention such a thing given that I will certainly buy any sequel to this, but I have to be honest and say that I'd happily spend 2 or even 3 times the smashwords price just to see a sequel to this story.
You're a fantastic writer and thank you for all of your work, and please keep it up!
Wow. Well first, I'm flattered and humbled. Thank you for taking the time to write that- feedback like this is what keeps authors going on those long nights between the first draft and the fifth. Every time I'm tempted to not do another pass, to not tighten up some dialogue or wonder if I should obsess over the tone of a sub-scene, I'll remember this comment, Anonymous, and make the story a little better for you.
ReplyDeleteSPU 2 will probably come out Summer 2014, life permitting, but if I keep getting feedback like this I may quit my day job!