Saturday, October 19, 2013

Open Thread: What do YOU want to see in femdom stories?

You've read my stuff on orgasmdenial and smashwords.com- you know the type of light, CFNM, T&D femdom I do. 

What subjects/situations/concepts do you wish were tackled in femdom stories?

If I had more time, I'd take commissions for stories, churning out tales custom to your kinks (if they matched my writing style) for $15.  Not much to get to finally read the story you've always wanted!

But consider this free comissioning with no deadline.  Any situations you'd love to see?

P.F. Dee

21 comments:

  1. Something with NFCM (yes, you read that right. Naked girls teasing and rubbing all over a clothed guy and he can't get closer than the fabric separating them) and no humiliation. I know humiliation seems to be wildly popular but it's not arousing to me at all.

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    1. Huh. NFCM is a slant I've never played with. CFNM is all about humiliation of the guy, but in NFCM I guess the main driver would be... temptation? I've seen this angle a few times in "guy pretends to be gay" or "guy dresses like a girl" movies where the main character gets invited into a locker room or something with hot, non-chalant nude women all around him and has to not react for some reason. It's mostly played for humor, but hmmm, I can see it working for titillation. Okay, anonymous, that's a good idea!

      Thanks,
      P.F. Dee.

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  2. One thing I'd love to see in the sex powers universe is more romance and caring femdom. Salamando has done a few involving women just coming into their powers and there is a wonderful non powers but society wide denial story on orgasmdenial.com by maybenexttime.

    I'd love to see genuine love and empathy from a woman seeing what guys have to go through in a powers universe. Maybe she knows she has to use her powers because it's for her s/o's own good, but it doesn't mean she has to take pleasure in his pain. Lots of cuddling and kisses after a denial instead of giggling and and cruelty if that makes sense?

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    1. As much as I enjoy love and empathy in real life, its kind of tough in my stories since they're so humiliation based. If you had a true loving wife, why would there be any denial at all?

      Unless there was a good reason for her to deny her husband, such as it is EXPECTED in proper society, and she feels for him really dear (giggle) but she just has to keep him backed up or what would the neighbors think!?


      Okay, maybe I can see that angle working...

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    2. So can I, that sounds amazing. I would love to read a story about the social mores and what's expected in a sex powers society. How different couples feel about things privately and the facades they put up for their neighbours and colleagues (who can of course see if and when the couple are cheating).

      Some women would genuinely believe all men ought to be denied constantly, others might put up the facade and cheat on holiday and yet others might be new age types who believe men shouldn't be denied, and how both the men and women in different strands of society might see each other.

      I was thinking maybe a student at the university (and I must confess I haven't read your latest masterpiece yet) has to frustrate and deny in order to graduate, but like a few girls her age she's interested in causes and human rights and feels bad about it. She can't cheat though because the Headmistress would find out, so she's left comforting and sympathising with the guy as she frustrates him.

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    3. I tried to design the general SMW universe as having numerous factors that contribute to society-wide tease and denial. Doesn't mean you can't still have loving and sweet wives or girlfriends, mind, just that even the kindest women have incentives to indulge in orgasm denial. Not the least of which are the medical benefits.

      The Gods at 18verse does have the de-aging effect in place as well, so if nothing else, there's that element to consider. A loving couple may engage in male orgasm denial just to bolster the woman's health (and perhaps the man, if GA18 powers can work for them as well). And a loving man would no doubt gladly give his wife the energy, and learn to enjoy OD for that reason.

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    4. Well, I don't know about GLADLY...

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    5. Well. "Best case scenario" for those who like romantic, loving teases. :P

      But for most men, I'm sure it's a bit flustering, to say the least. ;)

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    6. In this vein - I've always wanted to see some "engagement chastity" stories. Always been a fan of stories with a romantic/true love edge to them, and I've never really seen much done with the idea of a romance in a world where chastity cages have replaced engagement rings. A girl (not a dominatrix, or evil - just a girl) trying to pick out a good cage, offering it to her boyfriend as part of her proposal, locking him when he says yes, asking his mother for his hand . . .

      If it needs harsher elements, you could look to the prenup (possibly negotiated without him being aware of the exact "details"). Or maybe his future mother-in-law swaps the locks, to give her daughter time to break him in . . .

      But really, I'd like it to be a love story. Sweet, and touching . . .Something for the husband to tell his son, when his son is ready to start dating, and needs guidance picking a good girl

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    7. Casual,
      That's a good idea. A "Long Engagement" type of story. I don't know if it's better if ALL married men are caged, or just the men in that family. But that idea might show up in a Steel World story down the line...

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  3. I've also thought that there'd be good plot potential in a society shifting AWAY from universal male chastity. One where the older generation still pursues it, but its becoming less common among the next. For example:

    1)College (or twenty-something) girl has a male roommate. Its platonic, and the girl thinks the mores of the older generation are ridiculous and stodgy. However, when an older female relative (mother, older sister, etc) comes for a visit, he has to pretend to be her naked slave, locked in chastity. (Money is a good motive - older relative might have the ability to cut the girl off from the family money, and she can't make rent otherwise. So they have to pander to her prejudices). Hijinks ensue

    2) A newly married couple had planned to have more of an "equal" relationship. She, in particular, wanted a husband, not some naked slave-stud. But they're still products of their culture, and its . . . "weird" for her, to have a man walking around clothed (and not in chastity). Hijinks ensue as the two struggle between their egalitarian ideals, and the standards they were raised with.

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    1. 1) Casual, I love the first one- I can just see that tension as his platonic (but attractive) roommate asks him to do her 'a favor'. That has a good chance of ending up as one of my stories one day!

      2) This one's harder, I'm still looking for the the charged plate tension in it, but still, food for thought- thanks for the ideas!

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  4. hello, I wanted to know if a direct sequel was planned for "Gods eighteen 1: Kylie history"? Kylie is really hot, and I will love to see tease and denial of his brother, his father and especially his new stepmother

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    1. Mael,

      No direct sequels are planned, I thought the story wrapped up Kylie's journey nicely! Although you're totally allowed to write fanfic of what happens next if you want and post it somewhere, as long as you give a link back to the original Smashwords site where folks can get the book!

      Kylie was hot, and she was my first. You never forget your first...

      Thanks for your interest and your comment!

      PFD

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  5. Hi, I wanted to know if you could make a new history "Gods eighteen" a girl tease her stepmother and stepbrother and stepmother ca loop because it would be lesbian

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    1. Mael,
      I don't think there's going to be much more in the "Gods At Eighteen" series, especially involving family. GA18 One was Sister/brother teasing, GA18 Three was Aunt/nephew and Cousin/cousin teasing, and GA18 Four was Sister/brother again. Lesbian teasing isn't my strong suit, maybe it will show up in a different story. But what type of family teasing did you want explored that I haven't done already? If you come up with a good scenario, it may show up in a later story.

      Thanks for the suggestion!

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  6. Hi, I wanted to know if you could make a new history "Gods eighteen" a girl tease her stepmother and stepbrother and stepmother ca loop because it would be lesbian

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    1. Mael,
      Right now, there isn't any plan to do more Gods at Eighteen from Kylie's viewpoint. I feel like I left that story right were it should be, with a hint of more to come with Kylie using her powers on the mom.

      But you're free to take those characters and write your own version of a sequel- just link back to the original book if you do!

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  7. How about riffing on a group like PETA - but for males?

    For example, a new member infiltrates a facility for the "proper" training of males. She's there to disable it, or break a guy out. But everything about the facility - from the uniform she has to wear to maintain cover, to the things she sees - tempts her . . .

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    1. Anon,
      Hmmmm. That sort of story would have to be told from the female's point of view, which is not something I 'usually' do, (even though half of the just released Sex Powers University Episode 3.4 is from Amber's point of view).

      But it would be fun, to see a young girl come in with these high ideals and then slowly get seduced by the power of teasing men and boys. Maybe something like a 'prison secretary' sort of story.

      I don't have anything coming up that might fit this scenario, but I'll keep it in the idea hopper- thanks!

      PF Dee

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    2. Oh, and thanks for the idea, and for reading!

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