My intent is for this blog to be a place that readers of my CFNM, orgasm denial, light humiliation femdom fiction (found here: https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/PFD), to let me know what really worked for them, what didn't, and suggest story lines that they'd love to see explored.
One of the worst feelings, I believe, is to be reading a hot, hot femdom story on asstr.org, literotica, or orgasmdenial and when it ends, going "NO! What about this direction?!? Why wasn't this other idea explored in the way I liked?!" and having no way to tell the author that.
So I'm going to fill this blog with polls, going to allow all sorts of anonymous comments (and read them religiously), so that you and I can craft more fun, better femdom fiction together. Be warned: really good ideas suggested here may be turned into erotic books designed with you in mind!
I may also post tips if new femdom writers ask for instructions on making their work more fun or more arousing (erotic writing is still writing, after all, and those skills apply) but the main focus will be for you to 'commission' works, if you will, with the most popular threads being turned into novellas.
Let the voting begin!
Thanks.
P.F. Dee
Hello PFD,
ReplyDeleteI'm very happy to read your new story.
I'm like very much CFNM with school nurse and boy.
I would like to suggest one idea.
Why not imagine a boy who is trapped by his big sister like a subject for some medical experience : To test a new cream who is able to cure masturbation. This cream must be applied on penis and balls. And it will be not possible for the boy to became erect. He stay soft.(But the desire is present). (A sort of procedure 501 may be 502). Description of fear for the boy when he undestand what will be happen can be great. Of course it will be strapped without to know the truth. And also his sister nurse can test the effect of the medication and request to other nurse to undress in front of him to test the efficency of the mediaction
einstein1970
Einstein,
DeleteThanks for your suggestion! At first glance, a sister telling her trapped brother exactly what she's going to do to him while he can't escape is a hot little scene. The only thing that may not work is the cream making him soft- boys getting inappropriate erections is most of the fun of this fiction! But I can see the teasing aspect as her friends prance around topless or at the nude beach in front of him, giggling at his predicament... but there still has to be a way for him to get embarrassed and show how horny he is. I'll have to give it some thought. Maybe it could be one of the optional labs at term 2 in Sex Powers University...
This reminds me a bit of a multi-part story on Literotica called "Mrs. Andre Dates My Dad". When an eighteen year old boy's father marries a leading advocate for femdom, the protagonist is dropped headfirst into a world of CFNM, teasing, and spanking. When the story ends (the author went off on a tangent, and never returned), he's just begun "slutboy" treatments. Walking around nude, hands chained to his neck, horny as heck, and a massive erection that just won't go down. . . even when girls from school show up . . .
DeletePFD,
ReplyDeleteYou are amazing and love all your stories. A couple ideas I can suggest include a guy being infatuated with a fat girl's (or maybe also black girl) feet. He doesn't like the girl so much, but he loves her feet and she takes advantage of this by denying him masturbation, and eventually she forces him to marry her...
Another idea is a woman torturing a guy with her feet over a long-distance airplane flight. The woman has her feet on his lap for 5-6 hours, and he is errect and cannot even get up or do anything about it.
Hope you like these ideas, and thanks again for your incredible stories.
Carl
Hmmm, some good ideas. I couldn't do fat fat, but the girl could definitely be a little chunky, with a little bit of anger towards men because the ones she wanted passed her up for skinnier women. He's had this raging fetish he's embarrassed about, but his previous girlfriends always thought it was weird and never let him indulge it. So he asks her if she's kinky right on their first date, she asks "how kinky?" and... possibilities...
DeleteOn the other idea- oh yeah! But we've got to make the woman know him somehow... ex-girlfriend... no... co-worker. Yeah, that's it. They're coming back from a tradeshow where he's been stuck in a tight display booth with her for the last three days sneaking peeks at her ass and high heels, they've got a 5 hour flight back to Miami and she just wants to sleep and doesn't care HOW she stretches out. Does she feel his hard-on throbbing in his pants or not? She's got a boyfriend, she can't be teasing him. But then why does she keep shifting her legs in her sleep? That might go into SPU 2 or some later story!
Thanks for writing!
I agree that fat/fat would not work for me either, but a bit chubby might be interesting. I remember you hinted at this in your Summer Break (Tyler/Jake) stories, but the girl never appeared..
DeleteOtherwise another potentially interesting idea, might that of a couple on a cruise with the lady having fun tormenting her husband/boyfriend while onboard and on visits ashore too. Not sure but they could be with some friends/family, and there might even be a cute but mean cruise director.
Hello PFD,
ReplyDeleteI imagine a medical visit in Sex Powers University. One big sister who is doctor and who apply procedure 501 with nurses friends to his little brother. But little bro don't know the target of his medical check up. I imagine she can say something like " Thank you little bro to help me to test new medication..."
I hope to read the second part of Sex Powers University as soon as possible...
Thanks a lot for your stories
einstein1970
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ReplyDeletehello, I wanted to know if a direct sequel was planned for "Gods at eighteen 1: Kylie's story"? Kylie is really hot and I will love to see tease and denial his brother, his father and especially his new stepmother
ReplyDeleteConversations.
ReplyDeleteConversations between two women were amazing.. I came so many times reading that story. I suggest more conversations between women will hit the rocks off! There can be between-
1. Mom and daughter, about how to tease and deny the husband of the daughter.
2. Mom and mom in law, when they discuss the son's cum eating capabilities.
3. A group of guys, when they brag about their cum eating skills.
4. Public discussions and debates about cum eating and positions of wimps under the skirts of their wives.
5. Between 3-4 women, in front of their hubbies, about who eats cum the best!