Something short and completed in one installment, along the lines of the 2,000 word 'Rings of Control' that came to me as a simple image I got done in one night.
But looking at the reader stats, you guys didn't really go for 'Rings of Control' OR 'The Fireman's Mascot' (which I really liked), since neither crack the top 3 posts people have read this week, even though both are newer:
So I'm putting the call out:
What kind of simple short story would you like to see next? What's a great 'What if...?' that you've never seen explored?
Not looking for any sequels to my previous works (so no SPU or Accidental Porn Star, maybe a standalone Cocksitter's Club/Isle of Peternia if the idea is good), but what's a totally NEW situation/fetish you want done?
Any futanari ideas you've wanted to see?
Cum-eating?
Cuckolds? Hotwifery?
Spanking? Mom-dom? Aunt-dom? Niece-dom?
New types of chastity? Free-use boys?
A CFNM 'the Future is Female' program at a summer camp or something?
Looking to expand my boundaries a little.
Thanks all- your energy and ideas are half the reason I keep on writing!
PFD
Hi pf dee, first of all forgive my English if it is not so good. I really appreciate your story, I would like to became a patreon but unfortunatelly I have not credit card, so this blog is my only way to be in touch with your fantastic stories. I suggest you to write a story in which the main theme is CFNM in family with orgasm denial. I think you should inspire yourself on Pool Days, but this time I suggest to write it in third person, the main charachter should be a very well endowed male ( I don't like SPH ). I think a little ballbusting would be great. Have a good day.
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DeleteFirst of all, thank you for reading my work, even coming from another language! Your story idea might be hot, but without an extra twist or added element, I feel like I'd just be repeating what I did in 'Pool Days', with a well-endowed guy. I'll think about it, I sort of need a 'WHY' to make that idea interesting... Thanks for the suggestion!
Ok, I will tell you my perfect scenario. I imagine a political war between a mature woman and a younger opponent who is very confident, well hung and hates women. You can set this story in Magic Sex World so maybe she can tease and denial him during his speeches. I would like to read a story full of orgasm denial, ruined orgasm and a bit of ballbusting. I love your stories because you are able to create climax and put the themes I prefer ( ballbusting, ruined orgasms and T&D ) in a consistent scenario where the atmosphere is always light, your characters are not too serious, in other words for me reading your works is a great pleasure. Surfing on Internet, you and Salamando Flames are my favourite Femdom authors, no other stories are as funny and well written as yours. As I said I can't become a patreon and this is really frustrating for me, maybe one day you will paste some of your best Patreon stories here, I will be really grateful to you. As I said my English is not so good, I prefer read in English rather than write in English, I hope I was clear. Have a good day !
DeleteYou know me, I'm all about dem POWERS! :V
ReplyDeleteNah, but even that can get old after a while, I get it. I've been stepping outside the bounds of Sex Magic myself lately. So lets toss out some ideas:
Um... hmm... maybe a sexy Ghost story?
Cocktease "interrogation" story, without magic or technology? (Cold War era captured spy being milked of his secrets?)
A sorority hiring a reluctant, but cute, couple of boys to be house maids? And they have to go along with it due to convoluted rules, or losing a bet, or something.
Uh... I know you're not into random pick-ups at bars stories, but if you want something out of your wheelhouse, there's that.
Hmmm... cat burgler breaks into some rich guys house and decides to cocktease the code to his safe out of him?
Alien kidnapping? Alien Futa kidnapping?
Futa sex wrestling, where they are strapped into a 69 position and have to resist cumming. Maybe they're long time rivals, or have some history that makes this especially tense?
Sal,
DeleteThanks, that's a LOT of ideas! Of the bunch, Alien Futa kidnapping is one I saw badly done in someone else's self-published Amazon books, that I've always wanted to go fix!
Think of hetero men, abducted by taller, hornier, stronger but still curvy blue skinned sexy alien women, from a women-run society, eager to make the men recreate the 'pleasure' videos they've seen humans produce. Except that these aliens don't have an understanding of 'heterosexuality', and can't understand why these guys blanch at swallowing gallons of alien cum every day from here on out!
That might work.
On your sorority idea, this was the exact problem I was having- of COURSE I want a hot sorority to hire reluctant guys to be their maids, but the whole "convoluted rules or losing a bet or something" is what I'm trying to figure out. Without the WHY, the story doesn't have a foundation!
Anyway, thanks for those ideas. It's funny that I can picture how to make an alien futa kidnapping work 100x easier than I can a sexy ghost story!
Happy to help! :P
DeleteFor the Sorority thing, I can see it as a punishment for a crime sort of thing. Perhaps the guys in question may have something to the girls in the sorority or done some minor crime to the school. Like, the guys vandalize the sorority house, or steal all the girls panties, or spread their nudes on a porn site.
The guys don't want to go to jail, the girls want their revenge but maybe think prison is too much. So, they inflict some "poetic justice" by having the guys be maids for, say, a couple weeks, letting them know how it feels to be humiliated. The guys may even secretly think it's a great idea, until the *very* tight chastity belts come out!
As for a ghost story, I dunno, I can see it being like a sappy romance thing. A man's kinky wife dies, but her ghost comes back to "haunt" his cock. Maybe she doesn't reveal its her for a while, and he's experiencing teases from no where, before she reveals herself. Actually, I think I did a caption of that once...
Still, sounds like you got something with the alien futas. Whichever you chose to do, I'm sure you'll make it fun!
I don't think you've done a story with a submissive futa before. And after reading hundreds of Japanese novels, I can tell you I have a ocean of Ideas.
ReplyDeleteLets say we have a futanari that goes to an all girls school, and futas having the high sex drive they do she would constantly get an erection in the most inconvenient times.
So she ended up getting herself a chastity cage(or belt) Thinking that it was a good idea to "tame" her unwanted erections.
For a time it did work. At the end of the day she would go home and remove her chastity and "release" the days "stress". She keeps a key around her neck encase of emergencies, but she has to places it in her gym locker because jewelry is considered a safety hazard. So she leaves her things there assuming they will be safe like the hundreds of other rimes she has placed her possessions in the locker. When she gets back though she is in a panic searching througe her stuff, but a note falls from her possessions telling her to meet her at x location and how they know about her secret.
I did sort of do make an image based on this idea https://stiffdisciplines.blogspot.com/2019/07/secret-under-locked-and-key.html
I have like A million more ideas that I got from reading Japaneses novels, Let me know if you want me to sher some more things I've discovered. ;).
2 Tailed,
DeleteWell, That's definitely a new class of idea! This might work really well, because we get the submissive female, the hot pampered bratty schoolgirls, and a well-teased cock, all in one package!
Good set-up, good hook, it might not be the very NEXT story I write, but I'll bounce it around in my head and hopefully you might see it pop up as a one-shot before the end of the year!
Cute pic by the way! (I always get jealous of how easy world-building is in a simple captioned image vs. a short story. You never have to ask how they got there or what kind of school would allow this; all the set-up is implied and just accepted in a captioned image, no questions!)
A fantasy I’ve always had is meeting another femdom couple anonymously in a hotel, and us stripping our husbands to their panties and spanking them in each other’s presence. Then, making the boys 69 each other as we encourage them with our paddles to their backsides. Whoever spews first gets his ass fucked by the other man to completion. I know... twisted sister!
ReplyDeleteOhhh, this might be a winner. Quick question- any reason the meet has to be anonymous? The way I'm leaning on writing this, the couples know each other in vanilla life, the crafty women know that the date is coming but the men don't, leading to a very embarrassing double reveal in the hotel!
DeleteYes, even better! (I was thinking about how to get it done in boring r/l)
DeleteFeel free to borrow the artwork of Iill jo from https://strictjuliespanks.blogspot.com/2016/04/my-fantasy.html if you want to illustrate it (I have full rights to it, of course!).
Sorry... by which I mean lil jo gave me all rights so I am in a position to pass them on to you and am happy to do so!
DeleteI like the landlady scenario. There is an old unfinished story called Jason an obedient son where a strict over protective mother finds accommodation with a strict widow for her college bound boy. The beautiful widow uses spankings and forced nudity to subjugate Jason and her other boarder Peter in quick order. A visit from a college friend who happens to be a doctor brings free medical exams for the perpetually embarrassed duo. A group of strict mother-in-laws tasked with putting young grooms on the right path could be fun.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, thanks for your suggestion! To make a landlady scenario work for me, there might have to be some previous relationship between the boys and the landlady.
DeleteMaybe she's their widowed aunt, or a previous babysitter from when they were kids? I don't know if a random woman can get away with forced nudity and spankings of college-age boys, unless the boys WANT it in some way...
In this scenario, were you picturing the Jason to be nude and spanked by his mother before moving out, and she just 'hands him off' to the landlady to continue, or is CFNM a totally new situation for the young boy? Either one changes the story dynamic.
Once that's set up, then we could do the medical exams, etc. as you set out.
Thanks for the idea!
The Jason story starts out with him being subjected to inspection, rectal temps and spankings from his mother. Mom is worried about Jason going away when her friend puts her in touch with her widowed cousin who takes in student boarders. Further chapters could introduce some niece and her bestie to help subjugate the young men.
DeleteHey Dude, do what feels natural. One one my favorite stories from you is "You know the rules". You can feel that you were inspired that day hehehe.
ReplyDeleteDon't worry about repeating yourself, changing small details can move the story to a whole other direction. Take the Pool Days and add chastity, or feminization or cuckolding for the son, make the females more sadistic or more perverted, change the perspective and you have a whole new experience. Just make them flow naturally.
I've been a fan for years and lately the stories have not been all that great, they were an unfocused mess. Correction was all over the place been 1/3 a legal drama for a setup, then a collection of characters and ideas that were introduced, hinted, never developed and dropped off, all leading to a cliff hanger, it was weird and disappointing.
My favorite book of yours is "Gods at Eighteen: The game girls play", everything flows, each element introduced adds to the story, one thing leads to another.
As for me, i am all for sissy or futa in extreme denial. So any story with a futa or sissy (or feminization) being dominated by a female and unable to ejaculate for weeks or months suffering from bloated blue balls being constantly teased bound and edged begging to cum and yet hoping that the denial keep going forever, is heaven for me.
By the way, do you have any more sissy books? I have Sissy Sort 1/2 and Gods at Eighteen: The Games Girls Play, i'm gonna get next month Sex Powers University 4 and 5.
Anon,
DeleteThanks for that... praise, I guess? A during lot of stories like 'Pool Days', there are a lot of directions I DIDN'T choose, and maybe you're right and I could re-imagine one of those with a different twist.
On the sissy stories, you've basically gotten all of my published ones. Looking at the numbers, sissy stories sell/get read about 1/2 to 1/3rd as much as my base CFNM T&D stories, so I don't write them as much. But I do like a really well written sissy tale every now and then. I should do more of those.
The subby futa at the all girl's school mentioned above might be coming later this year, look out for that!
Thanks for your comment!
'But I don't know if I can write another simple CFNM story like that without feeling like I'm repeating myself'
ReplyDeleteLet's be real here, people like the same stuff. There is a reason why Disney remakes and remakes in general are a huge hit, they may feel lazy and insincere to you, and you have writer's honor or something?
But they are definitely well liked.... so it's not it would be considerd a failure perse because of repetitive storyline.
Also, I like Mom-dom and Sister-dom, just as my polling vote ^^
I’d like anything involving mom or sis, also the futa versions and cum eating.
DeleteI think the most important is a status/relationship change, so he doesn’t start already dommed by them. Something happens that results in a position change where he previously wasn’t in, (gets caught/tricked/manipulated, etc) leading to the interest of mom or sis to re-evaluate his position, and now has to deal with the changes and first-time experiences in his new situation as his life is about to be changed entirely :3
I enjoyed Cocksitter's Club, Kylie's Story, and My Perfect Angels (in that order) the most out of all your works. I would love to see a story that combined the ideas from all three. Daughter has daddy in chastity for whatever reason (universal locking laws or just plain seduction) and now is responsible for his release & humiliation schedule
ReplyDeletePFD - My fave are female docs giving exams (to either male or female). The doc is bored and a little bemused, and the patient has to pass their medical in order to get the job / sports scholarship. The doc is having her fun, and the patient doesn't know whether to masturbate or cry when he or she gets home.
ReplyDeleteMy fave of yours... Accidental Porn Star. But so many of yours are so good, hard to choose.
Hi Dee :)
ReplyDeleteFirstly I'd just like to say I'm a huge fan of your work and a big thanks for everything you have written so far! My favorite story of yours is by far Cocksitters Club and I hope some day we get to see a part 2. Also looking forward to reading sisters & dragons 2!
I've seen you suggested a pet play story on your Patreon before but it didn't catch on. Though it's not something you have really covered in the past I'll suggest my idea here anyway since you are looking for a new concept.
I was thinking of a story where a guy's roommate gets a dog that doesn't obey him but obeys her (the roommate). The roommate gets a cute young dog walker who can train dogs. The walker suggests he needs to empathize with the dog and learn what it's like from it's side before shouting orders. She could enforce rules like no getting up on the furniture. Or if the dog humps things and our hero keeps telling it not to do so, then maybe he could be placed in a chastity belt. Or lose the use of his hands. The roommate could help enforce these new rules when dog walker isn't present.
Thats a bit detailed but the idea is basically a cute dog walker turning a guy into a puppy so he can empathize with his disobedient dog. Magic might work I don't know but I hope you like it :)
I like the puppy play idea but with females and a male, the powers could be used so all girls think its a dog, puppy with big low hanging balls but its her blue balled room mate, some light ballbusting could be fun and teasing say they find the naught puppy sniffing there panties
ReplyDeleteSo after reading this the other night I couldn't help but lay in bed and brainstorm a few other idea's :p.
ReplyDelete1. I was thinking a cfnm story where a college guy has a crush on a girl who is the star of a play in the theater. Someone dropped out last minute and she needs someone to fill in. Our hero agrees to do so as he's infatuated by the girl. What he doesn't know is the role is for a naked character. He only finds this out when he is in too deep. Now he has to rehearse, hang around backstage and perform naked. Maybe as an add on the role could have him in a humbler(maybe it's a kinky play or hes a puppy) or a low down pillory (maybe a play set in medieval times). Basically something that has him on his knees where the girls can tease him with their feet.
2. A guy lives with his strict yet loving mother who believes everything she reads online. Including that cum eating is healthy for you. She thinks masturbating is gross so the son is in chastity yet still has to eat the cum of others. Maybe she gets him to extract it from his friends. Maybe she uses magic to make their balls big and bursting with cum. Maybe she works in a sperm bank and has a lot extra laying around.
3. A tenant lives with his landlord / roommate and they work as a sex toy tester. The tenant is struggling to pay bills and agrees to test some of these toys out on the landlord / roommates behalf in exchange for cheaper rent. Our hero could be forced to spend the days / weeks in cages / humblers / chastity belts or maybe some toys that haven't been invented yet ;)
So yea that is what I brainstormed. The puppy one and theater one are my favorites but I'd love to hear your thoughts :)
I would love to read a continuation of the after college cuck- story ...the first chapter was really hot
ReplyDeleteI only check your blog periodically, but it occurs to me that your numbers may not be reflective of how many stories got read since they are, I'm pretty sure, about how many people clicked on that post in particular. I know that I read both of those stories around that time frame you were sampling, but I'm sure that neither of my reads counted because I didn't click on them. They were both on your main page at the time, so I didn't need to do any clicking to see them. Older stories would need to be clicked on to be read, but the newest ones are just there and wouldn't need clicking.
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