So I've got a lot of femdom ideas floating around my head and hard drive, but nothing really gelling into a story. So I figured I'd throw it out to you, the readers.
Do you want me to finish Sex Powers University Year 3 with episode 3.6? The Accidental Porn Star? The SPH after-college cuck story? Or start something else entirely?
What's a type of story you've never seen anywhere else but always WANTED?
Not saying I'll do it, but it would be interesting to see, for me anyway, what readers of this blog wanted to see next.
(And you might get lucky- 'Steel World' was born from a reader's comment, so who knows?)
Thanks!
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I would love to see you finish Victoria's litter! Prob my favorite story of all time and it's a story you've said you probably will not flesh out. :(
ReplyDeleteInteresting- what did you like most about it? And did Victoria have to stay a strong muscle teen, or could she be a normal flighty cute teen in the finished version?
DeleteThanks for your comment!
No she would not have to stay a muscular teen for me to enjoy it. I really like flighty as well.
DeleteI really like the steel world stories in general. I also really enjoyed the puppy play. I feel that is a kink that is not usually explored in erotic literature. I also personally enjoy the foot fetish undertones.
I'm a big fan of your writing in general and I dunno something about this story really struck a chord with me
One concern I have about Victoria is that she's kind of one-dimensional. She's harsh and domineering . . . and that's it. She seems to have no hobbies, no interests, and no reason for coming down so hard on her charges. Nor have we seen much of a story arc for her.
DeleteNow, to be fair, we haven't seen much of her. And, for all we know, she has reasons for all of that. But blindly harsh isn't very interesting. There's definitely room for a harsh, strict cocksitter - but I'd like to see her fleshed out more.
I think Victoria would work very well as a puppy "breeder" of sorts. Her goal is to break the boys and sell them to girls who want a new boyfriend/puppy. That makes it easy to bring in some more flighty or interesting characters to balance Victoria's harshness.
DeleteMaybe a sweey younger girl looking for a literal puppy, an older detached woman looking for an oral/cleanup slave, a Miranda St-Clare type wanting a show dog?
Could make for some fun interplay as the boys realize they need to behave better to convince the better owner to take them home.
I would really like for you to finish year 3 of SPU.you ended it on a cliff hanger... over a year ago.
ReplyDeleteAch, I know. But what's left is writing the final, climactic sex fight between Troy's makeshift team and the evil-orgasm-ruiner's professional fighter team. And every time I think about sitting down and actually writing that huge, pages long throwdown, I just can't get excited for it. And I know that if I'm not interested in writing it, the output for the readers will be blah.
DeleteI've even taken to re-reading some of the earlier chapters of SPU year 3 to see if I can get back in that mood and it's not working.
I don't know. I'm more motivated to see Troy and Amber's relationship after the battle than writing the battle itself.
I don't know, maybe I'll get around to it someday. Any great payoffs you were looking forward to that section? That might inspire me.
The problem with ruined orgasms is you can only ruin Troy's load once before the tension is gone.
Excuse me if I overstep, but maybe Cheyenne could kick their asses, have it really impress amber then that can lead in to a love triangle between them and troy where Cheyenne can cuck troy. That's my fan fiction at least.
DeleteAs someone who's hit more brick walls than words he's written, I can definitely sympathize with writing yourself into a conundrum like that. Such is the risk of serialized writing, I suppose.
DeleteIf its any consolation, it once took me four years to complete a twenty-five page superhero "pilot story". The final stall-out took eighteen months before I finally finished the damn thing, all because I just couldn't get in the mood to do the battle at the end.
And shit, I've *still* never managed to continue, much less finish, Seven Stars.
Sal,
DeleteYeah, the battle in SPU 3.6 is what's stalling me. It's hard sometimes to mix plot and sex or tension and sex, while still keeping that fun, silly tone that Sex Powers University lives in.
Thanks for the words of support- I'm glad I'm not the ONLY erotic author out there with tons of unfinished works!
How about a continuation to "My sister forced me into CFNM"? I really loved that one. Not a fan of belitteling or humiliation, but through the end it became one of my favourite novels.
ReplyDeleteCan I ask what aspects/themes/scenes you loved the most?
DeleteHumiliation is my main theme in my books, and any sequel with them over the summer or them going to college would likely feature a lot of humil.
Well first of all the aspect of family femdom, seeing as it is kind of a niche genre, especially when written elegantly, like your stories most certainly are.
DeleteSecondly the way Gretchen eggs him on towards submission and showing him off, while acting as if it was his idea in the first place.
Thirdly the gradual descent into it, the involvement of Gretchens girlfriend, the part where it becomes routine and the tease and denial/ruination of his orgasms. In summary just the way you build up the world and the relations of the characters in it. A well paced story can be quite sexy all on ist own.
I am not opposed to humilation itself, it is just not one of my main kinks. Showing him off and humiliating him in front of females in general is fine and portrayed by you quite lovely. I just get a bit iffy about it, when other males are involved and it comes to literal comparisons. Don’t take from this that i didnt like how you found opportunities to humilate him, without anybody elses knowledge at the strip poker party for example. I wouldn’t want you to alter your style for stories, odds are i will like it no matter what, as I do with pretty much all of your stories. :)
The only thing i missed about it was the mother taking notice and perhaps deliberately helping the sister in her quest to humiliate her son and fainting innocence while actively becoming part of it and perhaps going further in punishing him and his insolence, perhaps deliberately turning him on just so she has an excuse to punish him.
With the quite superb ending you delivered, I had hoped that would become a thing although it would be quite funny too, if it took a turn for the unexpected as well. Maybe the mother decides that the treatment should be fair and now the sister is forced into nudity, or something along the lines of finding the idea so appealing, she just decides they are now all a nudist family.
Lot's of oppurtunities for humiliation aplenty and i hope i can look forward to more!
By far my favourite story of yours is "The Dude Ranch", where you manage to create an entire world that is absurd on the face of it, but somehow make us believe in it. Without any magic or anything like this, which always requires an extra layer of suspension of disbelief on top of the femdom-aspects.
ReplyDeleteI think it could be really interesting to see that idea being expanded into a bigger context, an entire country or an entire planet being ran in this way, with women somehow figuring out a way to use men's sexual dependency to consolidate power for themselves.
What I really enjoyed in Victoria's litter was the mixing of male and female submissives. That's something fairly unusual, though it opens up many unexplored possibilities, and something I would certainly like to read more of.
Hah! I just recently realized the thing I write the best were absurd worlds for femdom and humil to take place in.
DeleteSex Powers University with sex magic- absurd.
Steel world with its 100% male chastity- absurd.
The Isle of Peternia short I just posted here recently, with 100% male nudity- absurd.
My 'realistic' stories, like "Tough as Nails", are moody, but not as free-wheeling and fun as the absurd settings.
Good feedback, someone else once asked for a Dude Ranch sequel, but I didn't have any ideas for one. Dexter and his cowgirl (spoilers) were happily ever after in that one, and their love is what made the plot go.
On your idea to make it bigger... that's sort of the Isle of Peternia idea, but maybe we could scale it down to just a religious camp in the woods or something...
It's been said but yeah finish SPU. When you started writing year 3 you mentioned somewhere that once its finished the bundle would be more price friendly so i have been waiting for you to finish :)
ReplyDeleteAs to other ideas, so far my favorite story of yours is Gods at Eighteen : Kylie's Story. The ending hit a cord and left me hanging there :), to continue that story would be a dream for me. So without writing spoilers, something in the lines where it finishes would be nice, doesn't have to be a continuation of Kylie.
Yeah, based on these comments, I think I'm going to have to finish SPU year 3. I didn't know so many people were waiting on that!
DeleteKylie's story is probably finished as it stands, however. But you can think of her as having spawned all my other Sex Powers books, so she lives on in that sense!
Yay for SPU 3! :)
DeleteI agree that Kylie is finished, adding to it would lessen it somehow(if I'm making any sense) regardless of my preference.
On a different note have you ever thought about a hardboiled SexMage detective story or stories. Think Dresden Files meets SexMagic. It could be whole epic series or a bunch of little snippets, where you could fool around with different ideas, on a case by case basis.
I really would like to see SPU 3.6 I must addmit that my main focus while reading SPU 3 lay on the scenes that didn't involve fighting. I loved the cheerleader part (teasing in the Shower scene) and Troys humiliating from Amber and Cheyenne while beeing denied , the Training in SPU 3.5 lasts Scene was also really exciting. I would love to read more about that.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good Work,I really like your writing style, I can feel how much effort flews into it while reading.
Greetings from Germany
Thanks! Yes, I think SPU 3.6 is going to have be my next project, based on all these comments. Look for that sometime early 2018.
DeleteAnd I'll try to put in more cheerleading teasing and humilation for you, German reader!
How about a lot of the shorter "scenes." More flexibility and experimentation. You can spin the best ones off to large stories.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, English isn’t my first language, so please excuse any mistakes.
ReplyDeleteSince I know this blog from your Literotica submissions, to be honest, I would really like to read another thrilling chapter of The Accidental Porn Star.
But for general reason, it's because The APS is a breathtaking story. The first chapter is very promising, and many erotic things can be developed from there. The story flows nicely with the humiliation that increase in every chapter.
My favorite part in The APS is when Susan was blackmailed to experience a public humiliation. The conflict between her conservative side versus her pornstar side is just amazing. You describe the situation very well and make it more humiliating for her. And the first-person point of view also make the story more erotic.
I hope the next chapter is not the end. And I hope to see greater level of humiliation and greater danger for her truth on the next chapter(s), such as: larger amount of crowds; or more dangerous type of audience (colleagues, voters, neighbours, friends); or more dangerous tasks (no mask, orgasm, streak/stroll, drive naked, tied); or maybe even more dangerous places (broad daylight, outdoors, public places, busy office, neighborhood). Greater danger for greater thrills.
Well, first thank you for reading my stories in English, even if it is your second language!
DeleteI do plan on finishing APS sometime in 2018, I just have to plan it after SPU 3.6.
Maybe the next chapter is the end, maybe not- but poor Susan can't take much more!
Thank you so much! Glad to hear that. But I think Susan would agree with me, because she craves more.. :D
DeleteI would love to see you finish the Sex University stuff, or see some one-off stories in that setting. Perhaps some stuff dealing with women who take things too far and get unique punishments themselves.
ReplyDeleteAccidental porn star - the hottest thing I've ever read.
ReplyDeleteIf it were up to me, there'd be more reluctant lesbian action in the next chapter.
(That's actually in the cards a little bit coming up for Susan, Anon, thanks for the suggestion!)
DeleteIt will probably be well into 2018 for me to finish off that story though, with everything else going on (SPU 3.6, etc).
"The SPH after-college cuck story" sounds like a winner...for a guy that's a little dicked loser. :)
ReplyDeleteVanessa,
DeleteYeah, I had 3 more chapters of that planned out, we haven't even gotten to the good part of the cucking yet!
But someday. Oddly enough, SPH and CFNM are the main search terms readers use to get to this page, so maybe I should write more free fiction in that vein...
I loved the first part of that story. I'd buy the rest if you posted it somewhere.
DeleteI read Cocksitters Club and i liked the Universe you created there - A world where young dominant girls hold chastity keys of males.
ReplyDeleteI would like to see a story based on a sorority in a more female dominant world, maybe 30-40 years from now on. Every College in this time has a whole femdom sorority with its own campus where males are treated as slaves while woman enjoy a leisure party life. Chasitiy cages with remote controlls are mandatory and males are and controlled by assigned females. Males are also exposed to humiliation and amusement.
Every year a sorority takes new natural beautiful, dominant girls and teach them the way of living a sophisticated elegant life while controling males. At the same time, males can apply to serve the sorority. The applicants are either beta males that desperately want to serve princess/goddesses or a place as a servant in the sorority is the only way to get funds/scholarships to finance college.
Dont get me wrong. Its not a universe where ALL males are slaves to woman. Its just a world where female domination is becoming more and more popular and those sororitys are the pillars for establishing such a mindset and lifestyle into the next generations. The sororitys could therefore be funded by industries that grounded in the mainstream but additional shiftet towards womanhood and feminity like Victoria Secret, Agent Provocateur, political partys, Hollywood, sillicon valley and many more.
Those organisations have the agenda to continue and strenght female domination.
I hope that i could express my ideas understandable. Thank you for reading and for your other stories.
I love the idea of a direct sequel to The Cocksitter's Club; I think the way the last one ended leaves room for a lot of development. Robert's been getting ready for Lori's return for months so he thinks he'll be able to make the most of the situation, and in response Lori just ups her game to break him. Robert finally manages to run fast enough and gets to shower with her, but she just blindfolds him the whole time and doesn't let him touch her. He's used to longer lockups so he thinks he'll be able to behave extra well and impress her, but she makes him watch cumshot compilations to keep him frustrated, or her bedtime stories consist of her telling him what she lets her boyfriend do to her.
ReplyDeleteAt the very beginning of the first one you also hinted at a daughter who's away at college, and I would love to see Lori use the daughter to add to Robert's humiliation, either by somehow incepting a fetish or by skyping the daughter in to watch her dad beg for release.
I could get behind a sequel to either the original Steel World story, or Cocksitter's Club.
DeleteThe original Steel World storyline ended with a very provocative idea - Clara and Kate teasing Ted about the erotic wrestling tournament. Running with the idea could go somewhere interesting. Clara and Kate join an amateur erotic wrestling league, and bring the guys to cheer them on. The girls get nervous as their match gets closer and closer, watching the other girls wrestle: the hot twenty somethings, the women their own age. The guys, desperate in their cages . . .
As for Cocksitter . . .I'm not sure I'd want another round of Lori. We've already seen her methods, and Robert's wife wouldn't want him getting too obsessed with another woman. There are another half-dozen girls in the club - I'd rather see one of them developed. Possible directions:
*Robert's rehabilitation - Martha doesn't keep Robert as keyed up as Lori did, so he starts reverting to his old bad habits. He stops running in the morning, and starts eating more sweets. Martha doesn't hold him to the daily tease-and-denial routine, and lets him orgasm more frequently . . .
So, when she goes off on her next trip, a different cocksitter has to whip him back into shape. If Lori's methods didn't make enough of an impression, maybe someone else's will . . .
*Robert's business trip - Robert is sent abroad, to a non-ULL compliant country. Somewhere he'll have to be unlocked, in order to pass through customs. Someone will have to go with him, in order to put him back in his cage . . .
-Martha might arrange for a club member to go. Martha pays her way, in exchange for free 24/7 cocksitting of Robert - broaden her horizons, that kind of thing. Could be interesting for both Robert and the cocksitter, seeing how life used to be, pre-ULL. Taking a client out to a strip club would be VERY eye opening for both Robert and sitter . . .
-Robert's work arranges a professional cocksitter, to keep their insurance premiums low (and prevent Robert from jumping ship to a bank in a non-ULL country).
Given that Robert's a banker, somewhere like Great Britain (shades of Brexit?) or fiercely independent Switzerland might both be good destination choices.
Hello P.F.Dee. I am a huge huge fan of your work. I love the work of incest stories with sex magic. I would love to see a story of 2 daughters(twins) of a widowed father teasing her dad. One daughter is kind and considerate and soft hearted. Other daughter is very kinky, loves denying orgasms and naughty. Both daughters love dad very much. no question about that. ALso dad doesnt wanna see other women after death of his wife when the kids were just 6 years old. so daddy eventhough doesnt wanna see any other women, but he has to relieve himself of sexual pressure by jerking off. But since the girls are now of 18 years, they got sex magic an can see all dirty fantasies of their dad and start to tease him for fun and laugh. its a happy family but girls like to have fun with dad. Please make a story with this plot I would really love your story with this situation.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds a lot like "Gods at Eighteen: Kylie's Story," just with an extra daughter. In Kylie's Story the one daughter kind of fills both of the roles you are describing.
DeleteNo. the kylies story is not what i expected in my comment. In that story the father falls in love with another woman. I dont like that The father should not fall in love with any other lady after his wifes death. then daughter should start teasing him. I hope u have not read kylies story properly dear
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