These are the results from the poll on what series I should continue next:
Gods at Eighteen: 42%
Sex Powers U: 33%
Normal world CFNM stories: 14%
Sissy Sort: 9%
This is good, since my plans are to write SPU 2 next, which is in the Gods at Eighteen universe, so that will satisfy 75% of the audience.
Also, I won't feel bad about maybe never continuing the Sissy Sort series, which was written on a bit of a lark since I typically didn't like sissy stories. (Unless I got real horny and they were done just right..)
Which brings us to our next poll: like sissy stuff for me a year ago, what tag/theme would make you shy away from story you'd normally read?
I'm not going to include the obvious scat/blood/snuff, since that won't show up in SPU 2 anyway. But I'm trying to see, as I sketch out the plot, what are the minefields. Not to say they won't show up anyway if the story needs it, but maybe I won't dwell on it.
Put any dealbreakers I missed in the comments, or use them to explain yourself!
Sunday, November 3, 2013
Saturday, November 2, 2013
Steel World: a short scene, inspired by YOUR comments!
How many ideas from your comments on this blog can you find in the short scene below?
I count three!
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"Ah, the end of another relaxing
day," Clara sighed as her husband finished kissing and licking
her post-orgasm pussy. She pushed his eager tongue away with a
laugh. "It's okay honey! No need to go for three tonight!"
"Please Clara!" Ted cried,
sitting up and grabbing his wife's legs. "Can't you unlock me
just for tonight?!?"
She giggled, looking down at the small
metal tube dangling between his thighs. Ted had been of average
endowment when he had been Wild, his cock even bordering on large.
But the chastity cage the State had locked him in was so tiny- it was practically dainty! How did all of him fit in there?
Ted always complained that the tube was
too small, that it hurt at the slightest arousal, but Clara deferred
to the government fitting technicians. After all,
she thought, they were the professionals.
"Oh dear, you know I can't,"
she giggled, fingering the silver key that hung around her neck on a
slim chain. The key and chain were dainty too- so fragile, yet
holding so much power! She kissed his forehead, smelling her own
juices on his face. "Just four or five more days, and then it
won't look so bad."
"I don't care how it looks to the
women in your tennis club!" he fumed, stomping to the dresser
and picking up a handtowel from the stack, then wiping his face
clean. "I need to get out of this damn cage!"
"You know the cage's wifi
transmitter will go off as soon as I put the key in the lock! How
would it look tomorrow morning when all the wives check the State webpage
and our house is the only one that has a red X over it! After only
ten days! Millie and Kate would never let me live it down!"
"But Clara! This hasn't been an
average ten days!"
Clara smiled, looking at the dresser.
"Yes. That stack of handtowels is getting pretty low. I've
kept your tongue hard at work every night, haven't I?"
Ted blushed. "Yes. And every
morning, too!"
"Sorry, I'm just
going through a horny phase!" she giggled. "You'll do the laundry tomorrow, won't
you dear? We wouldn't want you to run out of handtowels and have to
sleep with my scent on your face all night."
He sighed. "I'll do a few loads
in the morning."
Clara smiled, fingering the key around
her neck. "I knew you would." She patted the bed. "Now,
come here. Maybe I can at least make one part of you feel
better." Ted sat next to her and she proceeded to rub the knots
out of his muscular shoulders.
"So tense!" she giggled.
"Could this have something to do with what happened at the gym
today?"
"I still can't believe you did
that!" Ted groaned. "Pulling me into the women's locker
room after our yoga class!"
"Everyone needs to shower after
hot yoga," Clara giggled, kneading his neck. "And now that
all women know that all men are locked, why not have a little fun?
All those hot co-eds who tease you with their bodies during class,
now you finally got to see what's under their tight yoga pants! Or not- who knew so many of them shaved their nethers bare!"
Ted groaned. "But you didn't let
ME take off my clothes! Or the cage!"
"You really wanted to show this
tiny cage off to the girls?" she laughed. "They'd think
you were hung like my finger! No, it was better for you to shower
over your shorts while ten nude women
rubbed soap all over their slippery bodies just
inches from you." She giggled as his cage surged again and Ted
moaned. "Mrs. Kipling's daughters have really filled out,
haven't they? I forgot how perky eighteen-year-old breasts could
be."
"Clara!" he cried, grabbing
at his balls.
"Oh, I'm sorry, dear! It's just
something women notice. I won't mention it again," she said,
kissing on his neck as she rubbed his spine and lower back.
"Thanks."
"There, you're getting relaxed
already. See, just three months in and you're already adjusting to
the cage," she giggled. "All the boys at school have
adjusted too. They're so well behaved now! I hardly have to send
any of them to detention; just the threat of a note to their mothers
whips them into shape!"
"That's good I guess," Ted
sighed, rolling his shoulders as she worked down his arms.
"And did you notice?" she
asked. "The President was making all those speeches, about
bombing Syria for no reason at all, even though 90% of women were
against another war? And then during the last press conference, the
First Lady just coughed and played with that key around her wrist,
and that was the last of the war talk! Think how many lives has the
Universal Locking Law has saved already!"
He grunted. "I guess. I
just...it's been ten days Clara!"
"They start at two weeks over in
Europe you know," she said, pushing him onto his back to start
massaging up his legs. "Even for young boys, who are the
horniest! That's why the girls at the country club are insisting
their members go at least month. It's just not decent otherwise!"
Ted moaned as she rubbed his tense
thighs, working her way north. "But... it's harder for me...
you're much hotter than any of the other country club wives!"
"Sure I am," she laughed,
rubbing the tight spots around his cage with expert fingers.
"Flatterer. I've seen how you look at Kate."
"I don't-"
"Don't lie," she chuckled,
pushing the blushing man's legs farther apart to get better access to
his balls. "Now that you're locked up, I don't mind you
peeking, and Kate doesn't either."
Clara's husband groaned as she started
massaging his full balls, rolling them in her fingers and giving them a little relief from the metal ring separated them from his
body.
"Really?"
"Sure! Why do you think she bends
over so much in that tennis skirt when we play doubles together? She
likes teasing all men, but you in particular. Look all you want!"
He gulped. "Okay."
She kept massaging his balls. "Feel
better?"
"Yeah. A little."
Clara smiled and kept going. "And
you know what Kate and I were talking about last week? What we both
thought would be really really hot?"
Ted gulped again. "No. What?"
"If... just for the rest of the
year...I gave your key to Kate and she gave me Frank's to wear!"
He sat bolt upright in bed. "NO!
That would be horrible!"
"You don't like the thought of
having to ask my best friend if you can cum?" Clara giggled. "I
like it. I like it a lot! I'd love to see the four of us out to
dinner, you trying to flatter and pamper Kate while Frank tries to do
the same to me. And neither man's wife having the power to give
him release- only the other woman!"
Ted rubbed his forehead, trying not to think about
that while she kept massaging his sore balls. "That sounds
horrible! Thank god you asked me first." Clara's giggle made
him open his eyes. "What?"
She had a mischievous schoolgirl grin.
"We already did it. Last week!"
"No!" he cried, leaping
forward to grab the key hanging between her breasts to read the
number engraved on it. Every locked man knew his Penile Security Number by
heart- if anything happened to his wife, that was the only way to get
a replacement. And this key ended in a '5', not a '9'!!
"Clara!" he whined and she
fell into a fit of laughs.
"That's probably what caused my
horny phase!" she giggled. "Seeing you do all those little things to try and get on
my good side all week, and knowing I didn't have the power to
unlock you even if I wanted to!"
"Please," he begged, sucking
on his wife's nipples just like she liked him to, "talk to Kate-
switch the keys back!"
"Oh, it's just a game honey, let's
try it for a few months," she giggled, rubbing the back of his
neck. "It's got me so hot, and you have to admit, if you
weren't locked, you'd find it pretty erotic too! Having to kiss my friend's ass to have a chance to cum?"
His blush gave him away. "I
guess."
"And Kate's more disciplined than
I am anyway. She'll be good for us. I'll probably break and let Frank
out once or twice a week if gives me the sad eyes, but Kate will keep you locked up as long as any other respectable businessman, no
matter what charming tricks you try on her!"
Ted groaned again and Clara giggled.
"Now that you'll stop bugging me to unlock you, how about
we do something fun before we go to bed? Let's visit that porno site
you used to love- the one where two women wrestle each other before a
crowd and the winner gets to fuck the loser with a strap-on?"
Ted's belt about ripped off even as
Clara massaged his balls with her fingers. "I'm not a member
anymore! I canceled it after the Locking Law passed!"
"I know," she giggled,
dragging her husband out of bed by his full balls and sitting in
front of the computer. "But I bought myself a two year
membership!"
"What?" he cried, as Clara
brought the site up. Even the welcome screen made his cage ache!
Clara grinned at him. "Well, Kate
and I were thinking, since our men can't really help us out in that
department anymore... maybe we should enter the wrestling tournament
ourselves, so at least one of us can get a hard fucking now and
then!"
Ted threw his head back and groaned in
pain, but then the Clara pulled his face next to hers. "But
promise me something?" she giggled.
"What!"
"That you'll come to the matches
and cheer for me even though Kate is your keyholder now? Some of the
stuff they let the winners do to the loser is really
degrading, and you know how wicked Kate can be when she's got an
audience. I don't know if I could take that!"
Ted sighed, pulling at his steel vise
belt. "Clara..."
"Please?" she said, peppering his face with kisses.
He laughed. "Okay, okay! I'll root for you to win!"
Clara smiled and held her husband's
trapped, full balls with one hand as she pulled him in for a kiss
with the other.
"I knew you would."
*** THE END***
(Keep the ideas coming!)
(Keep the ideas coming!)
Labels:
cfnm,
denial,
Free-Femdom-Fiction,
Steel world
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