Since Blogger comments are broken AGAIN, I’ll reply here asking those that submitted ideas some questions!
To Andrew, who suggested “Two Lesbian Sisters start getting it on, one a dom, one a sub”-
Which is hotter, a younger smaller hotter bratty sister domming her taller older volleyball-star-body sub sister, or a taller older stronger dom sister making her younger thinner shy sub sister squirming and wet?
To my friend from Italy, who suggested “an Eva Kant style femdom crime novel”-
Which is hotter, if the sulty, seductive femme-fatale femdom character is DOING the crimes, or if she’s trying to STOP the crimes? If she’s stopping the crimes, is the main character the young newlywed male police detective trying to stop her? This one sounds like a whole novel, I don’t know if it can be short.
To Sanjay, who suggested “Daddy/Daughter Femdom story, sort of like your Twins story”-
Dude we already DID that with the Twins story! And it was super long with a LOT of stuff in it! What else is left to do in that area?
To atwotailedfox, who suggested “D&D, but real, like a young Elf mage isn’t gaining spells as fast as he should, until a sexy Human mage helps him figure out his calling is sex magic and he needs to be teased and denied to really cast his spells…”-
This is an interesting one- I could see this becoming a whole book, and I’ve always wanted to write books that are ‘like existing book X, just with a lot of femdom and CFNM’. But to everyone, I guess- are stories set in a COMPLETELY different reality hot for folks? The hottness of most of my stories comes from how average the setting is, usually always suburban America where you could SEE yourself living next door to the slutty sisters, or whatever. If a young elf Gweldindor is traveling to the Fairy kingdom in Hwhwlfaltfodor to study under the great mage Yuwolshsyltdor, do you guys find that interesting as an escape, or should the settings stay in 1990’s America?
To Chris- who suggested ‘the competition between two BFFs to see who would have a threesome with their hot boyfriends (with some twists I won’t spoil)-‘
This is a hot cuck/chastity idea in THEORY, but I just can’t see it gelling enough to make it into my story. There seems to be a lot of backstory and ‘why would the girl sabotage her own boyfriend’ gymnastics pipe I would have to lay to make it go, so this one probably won’t happen. I DO love girls cucking their boyfriends, but if I did write it, I’d probably cut the whole competition out and the chastity, just make it a straight ‘naughty girlfriend cucks boy’ story in college, which isn’t the same idea. Sorry.
And finally, another great story idea from Lacy, who suggested something along the lines of “boy in chastity has to endure his cooler sister’s slumber party, which is the only time he ever gets unlocked for fun…” and I wanted to ask something of the WHOLE readership. If you comment on nothing else, comment on this:
How, um… wild do you guys want my stories to get? I call this the ‘gonzo’ scale. I have tight, restrained stories like ‘Pool Days’ which happen in everyday America where the characters act how you MIGHT think normal girls next door would act.
And then there are WILD stories like ‘Pool Days 3’ where female neighbors burst in the door and yell “I’m going to slap you in a chastity belt for 5 years and bend you over and take your ass with my 12 inch black strap-on while you lick your own cum from your best friends cock!!!1!!” before they even say hello.
Which do you guys like better?
I think some of my most fun stories are ‘Pool Days’, ‘Sisters & Dragons’, and now ‘Living with Lele’ where no man was in total, unending chastity, no one was teasing him for 23.5 hours a day and making him take huge strap-ons the size of his arm… and restraining those stories gives them a lot more… runway to escalate?
Or should we start in a gonzo world where all boys are kept naked and horny and in chastity 24/7, and the women are sitting around deciding what to DO with them, like half the captioned images I read?
I don’t know, it’s just a philosophical struggle I’ve been having. Let me know in the comments or at pfdee@comcast.net, and hopefully that will tip me into a new story direction!
So when Dee says blogger comments are broken...kinda seems like he can't see Anonymous ones?
ReplyDeleteI could see all the anon comments- I just couldn’t reply until now!
DeleteDee I love love your work and have followed for ten years your chastity and tease works are the best for sure and i will happily support more out of all of the above the only one that interests me is Lacy idea fyi your stoires adjusting, stop over in iles, lease and Mirandas Clinic are great more like that would defintley get my support.
ReplyDeletea pre op and post op of short stories with the procedure would be fantastic for the boys before they have there 501 done and there 1 month follow up, any thoughts on this
I think you're stuck in a false dilemma on the "gonzo" matter. There's a photo caption (one of Femdom Pussy Mistress's) that best describes the chastity/T&D fantasy - that it replicates the early stages of a romance, where both parties are interested in having sex, but instead tease each other and draw out the actual consumation.
ReplyDeleteA good male chastity/female keyholder story needs a woman who wants him to have an orgasm - even rooting for him to - but finds it fun to use chastity to tease him, and limit those orgasms as much as possible. It also needs a guy who wants his orgasm, but enjoys being teased by her, even if it means he gets fewer than he normally would. And their relationship needs to intrigue the reader.
So the best place for a story is between the two extremes. Too realistic ties the author's hands, as male chastity and cfnm are niche fetishes. That limits the action to the core couple, and huge swathes of the chastity fantasy can't be explored.
Too gonzo, and you lose the reader. The guy writing at Chaste Erotica is a good example. His sci-fi/chastity college/psuedo-Vegas stories used to be a personal favorite . . . then he went off the deep end with hardcore corporal punishment and rampant pegging on every street corner.
Your Steel Universe stories show a nice balance between the two extremes. Fringe political ideas have gotten passed into law before (think Prohibition), so the idea of the Locking Laws isn't crazy, on a local or national level. And they're just gonzo enough to let the women really have fun teasing the men. At the same time, the keyholders form relationships with their lockee, and want to see them happy/orgasming, too.
(I think we can all see the exact same premise being nightmarish, right? Its your execution that makes it fun.)
The old Mister Starkers stories have a similar balance. Its nationwide CFNM, but hardly a 24/7 femdom orgy. You get the silly fads - like pubic hair dying - you see in any society, and the girls having a lot of fun teasing the boys. But no one actually has sex in them - instead, the author basically goes from boy-meets-girl to them going steady (or new guy in town goes native), and cuts out right before the get too serious.
Still pretty out there - girls walk their guy on a cock leash to let people know they've gone steady - but also still very much a loving relationship. One the audience could fantasize about themselves being in.
To use your gonzo example, I think we could all picture a society where guys are expected to go to prom in chastity, but people still loose their virginity afterwards. The girls, excitedly talking with each other, about queening him for the first time, or unlocking him with a "borrowed" key, or making him wear a strapon. . . One going home to find her older sister back from college, pegging her boyfriend in the kitchen with a massive dildo (while the parents are away), and later finds it (freshly cleaned) on her bed with a note to show her date who is boss . . .The two standing before the hotel bed, before a very touching scene of him licking her to orgasm (and no dildo).
(Does this make sense? Its been a crazy couple of days, and I'm running on very little sleep.)
I think you're stuck in a false dilemma on the "gonzo" matter. There's a photo caption (one of Femdom Pussy Mistress's) that best describes the chastity/T&D fantasy - that it replicates the early stages of a romance, where both parties are interested in having sex, but instead tease each other and draw out the actual consumation.
ReplyDeleteA good male chastity/female keyholder story needs a woman who wants him to have an orgasm - even rooting for him to - but finds it fun to use chastity to tease him, and limit those orgasms as much as possible. It also needs a guy who wants his orgasm, but enjoys being teased by her, even if it means he gets fewer than he normally would. And their relationship needs to intrigue the reader.
So the best place for a story is between the two extremes. Too realistic ties the author's hands, as male chastity and cfnm are niche fetishes. That limits the action to the core couple, and huge swathes of the chastity fantasy can't be explored.
Too gonzo, and you lose the reader. The guy writing at Chaste Erotica is a good example. His sci-fi/chastity college/psuedo-Vegas stories used to be a personal favorite . . . then he went off the deep end with hardcore corporal punishment and rampant pegging on every street corner.
Your Steel Universe stories show a nice balance between the two extremes. Fringe political ideas have gotten passed into law before (think Prohibition), so the idea of the Locking Laws isn't crazy, on a local or national level. And they're just gonzo enough to let the women really have fun teasing the men. At the same time, the keyholders form relationships with their lockee, and want to see them happy/orgasming, too.
(I think we can all see the exact same premise being nightmarish, right? Its your execution that makes it fun.)
The old Mister Starkers stories have a similar balance. Its nationwide CFNM, but hardly a 24/7 femdom orgy. You get the silly fads - like pubic hair dying - you see in any society, and the girls having a lot of fun teasing the boys. But no one actually has sex in them - instead, the author basically goes from boy-meets-girl to them going steady (or new guy in town goes native), and cuts out right before the get too serious.
Still pretty out there - girls walk their guy on a cock leash to let people know they've gone steady - but also still very much a loving relationship. One the audience could fantasize about themselves being in.
To use your gonzo example, I think we could all picture a society where guys are expected to go to prom in chastity, but people still loose their virginity afterwards. The girls, excitedly talking with each other, about queening him for the first time, or unlocking him with a "borrowed" key, or making him wear a strapon. . . One going home to find her older sister back from college, pegging her boyfriend in the kitchen with a massive dildo (while the parents are away), and later finds it (freshly cleaned) on her bed with a note to show her date who is boss . . .The two standing before the hotel bed, before a very touching scene of him licking her to orgasm (and no dildo).
(Does this make sense? Its been a crazy couple of days, and I'm running on very little sleep.)
Thanks for this hugely well-thought out comment! I think you’ve hit on the heart of things- a gonzo premise makes things fun, but the one-on-one relationship has to form the core of the story. And I guess the whole challenge is finding a pair of premise and relationship that go together.
DeleteThanks for all those examples, even while you’re sleep depraved, they really fleshed things out! I had forgotten about the pubic hair dying CFNM stories- they were some of my favorite back in the day!
Alot of this sounds HOT and well written Anonymous and Dee.
DeleteYour bread and butter teasing chastity and blue balls stories' work so well id happily pay to read more and more regularly, the worse the blue balls the better haha ;)
I find the gonzo shit the most arousing, because it's like the fantasy but extremified.
ReplyDeleteIf you're still suffering from writer's block, I've got a suggestion. At the end of Cocksitter's Club, you introduced a trio of new girls in the club: Melissa, Jasmine, and Celeste. Try doing a five hundred words or less short story for each, showing each one cocksitting for a client. No deleting, no backtracking, no second guessing. Whatever comes to mind, goes in.
ReplyDeleteAll three are likely to be trainwrecks, but that isn't the point. The point is to play with different ideas and characters, and - afterwards - see which ones you like, or were going in interesting directions.
If that doesn't get the creative juices flowing, try looking back through your other stories for possible jumping off points. Do the sister and the paladin get together (from Sisters and Dragons)? What's a naked coed pool party like, when all the guys are in chastity?
Don't try for perfection - just write. If you hit gold, you can always do another draft (later).
Hey,
ReplyDeleteSome random thoughts on the post:
1. Gray Savidge posted a free femdom/chastity/cfnm murder mystery, more or less set in the Sex Powers universe. Its no longer on his website, but "Murder on Chastity Island" is still floating around the web.
2. The slumber party idea would work better if the older sister is trying to set the boy up with his crush (one of her guests). Ideally one who is nervous about boys and sex.
One possibility is the mother insists the boy be in chastity when she's out of town, or the sister has friends over. If she's been out of town for a while
A more gonzo variant would be to switch the relationships around. The older sister is trying to set up her younger sister with her crush, by throwing a cfnm/chastity party (teens/college age only). The boy, hearing about the party, asks to be one of the locked & naked server guys. So the boy and younger sister are busy being awkward around each other (him naked in chastity), and the older sister is having fun orchestrating fun and games exploiting the situation (and hoping they get together).
The more ganzo premise the better, but I love unrealisticly done stories :P
ReplyDeleteI have really been into phantasy anime lately, and a lot of Japanese LN go with the phantasy world trope. I rarely see anything like that in the west (at least in femdom). And I kinda want to see an elf boy be bullied a bit :V
ReplyDeleteAlso, I love how you spelled out the number "2" in my name XD
I recently reread your Cocksitter's Club story and really enjoyed it! Which I guess may be a vote for the non-gonzo variety.
ReplyDeleteIt also gave me an idea for a story in the same setting that seemed really fun to me... of course there are a lot of ideas here already, but I don't know what else to do with it so I thought I'd just write it down:
Two men who have some kind of conflict - should be something serious, maybe work-related - happen to both come under the supervision of members of the cocksitters' club at the same time. When the girls find out about the bad blood between them, they decide to make the two men make up. But of course they treat it as a "silly little tiff" and their "solution" is to force them into a series of humiliating bonding exercises. So the men have to engage in supervised play dates, hug and kiss each other (and maybe here some pictures might provide additional leverage), say what they like about each other (and the girls will insist they include praise about the other's physical appearance), and even shower together and shave each other's body hair. All of this will be very transparently done entirely for the girls' entertainment and titillation, but presented as being all about helping the two men. Maybe the girls will discuss the details of this "help" in their (silent unless asked a question) presence, where they'll argue that men just can't properly deal with their emotions and if they're mean to each other, it often means they really like each other, they just need some female guidance to properly express themselves... The final exercise will of course be a chastity release where they can only get off each other!
Thank you for considering my suggestions! For the lesbian story Definitely the first one! Younger bratty hot lesbian sister dominating ad sweetly denying orgasms to older taller volleyball-star-body sub sister! Maybe even some sock and foot fetish inside but I know you are a master of that 😂!
ReplyDeleteDo you know where I can find 'Sisters and Dragons'? I wasn't able to locate it on your blog or on Smashwords.
ReplyDeleteYes, you can find it on my blog, just look for the tag ‘Sister’ on the right, it is the most recent one, published March 2020 during the pandemic! It’s called “Another Free Story from my Patreon, because Italy asked”!
DeleteThis was when Italy was in lockdown by itself, and one of my readers was going stir-crazy at home, so asked for some free story from my Patreon, and Sisters and Dragons was probably one of the best ones I had written up to that point.
I don’t know if links work, but you can also find it here: https://pfdee.blogspot.com/2020/03/a-second-free-story-from-my-patreon.html
Enjoy!
Thanks, found it. Really hot!
DeleteOne more question - is there anywhere I can read “Liam’s Orgasm-Free Life?” I searched the blog, but I could only find the Patreon announcement.
There’s a lot of my former Patreon stories I haven’t bothered to put up on the blog yet- maybe one month I’ll get my stuff together and put them all on Smashwords- look for an announcement here if I do!
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DeleteHave to say, Lease to Own, Miranda's Clinic, and Living with Lele were my favorites... Nothing tooo gonzo, but fun and amusing blue-balled frustration...
ReplyDeleteAs to the Two Lesbian Sisters idea, definitely the younger, hotter, bratty sister in charge...
And......<<<<<“Daddy/Daughter Femdom story, sort of like your Twins story”>>>
"Twins" story?? Where is this one!?!? Not seeing it anywhere...
Please......let me know where this one is...
Thank you!!!!
Google twins pfdee
DeleteI appreciate it, but can't find anything like that...
DeleteIs there a specific title? Maybe "Perfect Little Angels"??
I've read pretty much all of PFDee's stories I can, but not placing one called "Twins".... :-(
Thanks...
Yeah, it’s the Perfect Little Angels one- there’s three parts. Magic story with a Dad and his twin girls.
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