Monday, June 29, 2015


After a break, I'm making a commitment to do more femdom writing again.  What that means is that I plan to: 
  • Once a quarter, release one new ebook to Smashwords (check out this quarter's release, My Sister Forced Me into CFNM)
  • Once a month, post a new, free, ~3,000 word short here, rotating through the universes of my books or generic femdom locations.  Just fun little scenes that didn't make it into the books for some reason.  
  • Once every two weeks (or more) post short tips on general erotic writing as they come to my mind, or survey pieces so you can make your voice heard about what you want to see in femdom writing!
That's the plan, anyway. 

Keep commenting on these posts with scenes or set-ups you've always wanted to see in femdom books but never have (if you don't tell me, it will never get written), any femdom author is free to contact me for advice on self-publishing or editing or story ideas or what not,  and watch the right side of this screen, to see previews of books coming up! 

All in all, it's good to be back, and thanks for all your support!

PF. Dee


  1. YES!!!
    I'm dying to see the "Steel World" universe stories.
    always want to read more details about "Universal Locking Law",
    what reactions men and boys would have once the Law comes into force,
    that they know every male in the country no longer have right to touch themselves,
    and how women and girls use the Law to takeover the government, workplaces, and school!!
    Hope you can post or release these scenes!
    I just LOVE your works,
    You are definitely the best femdom fiction writer EVER!
    Thank you very much!!


  2. Daniel,
    You're in luck! Quarter 3's book will be in the Steel World/ULL universe; I'm going to revise the first "CockSitter's Club" story with Lori published on this blog and make it a book (see cover at right) and write a whole new tale about the strong Victoria sitting three unruly males at once!

    Expect a short in that world each month, and the books should be out in September! Thanks for your comment!

  3. Looking forward to it, I actually bought SPU 2 a few days ago and just finished it, I thought it was fantastic. Any plans on a 3?

    1. Legato Bluesummers (great name, BTW) don't worry! "SPU 3: Troy Joins The Cheerleading Squad" is planned for Quarter 4 of this year, meaning it will probably be out sometime just before New Year's.

      I actually started planning a little of the plot running at the gym today, and I can't wait to fill out the fun bits as the months go on!

      Thanks for your kind words about SPU 2, that's what keeps me writing sometimes!

      P.F. Dee

  4. I don't see any posts about your story "My Sister Forced Me Into CFNM", so maybe this is a first comment. I must say, I enjoyed the story, with a few exceptions. It's also the first story I bought from this site, but apparently, now I can't re-read it. After the free sample, I get the notice that I have to buy the book to keep reading. Regarding the story, I understand the orgasm denial angle, but I think I would have enjoyed it a little more if Rodney's sister had been a little less cruel, he had been a little more willing, and there hadn't been the clothing destruction. It was a nice twist at the end, where Rodney thought his mother was going to be on his side, but instead decided that he would remain nude. I hope you do write a follow up, letting us know how Rodney's summer went with his required nudity at all times, regardless of who was at the home.
    I can relate to your critique of I published a couple of stories there, and my best received effort scored somewhere around 4.1 from those who voted. I took that effort and re-wrote the story, hoping for a better score, but got about a 3.8 the second time around. This time, and for the first time, I got a message back saying that changes had to be made. Minor things, like break up a long paragraph, and use a couple more quotation marks. I didn't think those changes were necessary, but I made them, so I could wait SEVEN FUCKING DAYS to see the story posted. I'm thinking about trying my hand at re-writing the story again, and posting it on Smashwords.

    1. Anon,

      First, thanks for the kind words about Sister CFNM!

      I thought it was a pretty fun little story, and it sold pretty well, but I put an after credits scene that said "I'll write the second chapter if 10 people post a review (good or bad) on Smashwords."

      And the fact that ZERO people have posted a review either means no one wanted the second book, or that no one reads after credits scenes.

      On your Smashwords problems, once you buy the book you own it forever, so I would contact their help line about that.

      Make sure you're logged in as you, and you should be able to download (not just read, but download) the book in PDF, Kindle or EPUB form.

      On your suggestions, you're proposing that they're sort of in the CFNM thing together? That the sister is a nice but still teasing sister, and he willingly goes along with being stripped for her friends?

      That angle might work, maybe you'll see a story about that later.

      And on Literotica, yeah, the law of large numbers is in effect there. If enough people read a thing, there will be some VERY LOUD people who love your work, some VERY LOUD people who hate it, and trying to predict that is like trying to predict the stock market. Too much noise.

      Smashwords is one way to get money for your work, but if you want FEEDBACK, I would find some small, curated site that fits your niche (mine is, post it there, and you should get more constructive feedback than you will on either Literotica or Smashwords.

      Thanks for commenting, and if you ever want input on your femdom stuff, you can send it to me at!


    2. Thanks for your reply to my post, which after seven months still appears to be the only comment regarding "My Sister Forced Me Into CFNM". I guess we'll never find out how Ronnie made it through the summer, being naked for Gretchen, presumably her friends, his mother, her book club, the cousins' visit, and maybe his guy friends who ever visited. I just reread the story. I'm not all that into femdom or orgasm denial, but it was a nice little story. A question for you, if you care to respond. My literotica effort is centered around a fantasy that is very loosely based on a fact. An actual event, followed by 99% fantasy. It involves a brother's voluntary nudity around his sister, and could certainly go into different directions - a one time only event, or multiple occasions involving visual only, her touching, orgasms, or sister's friends being added, for example. Putting thought to paper will require time and several drafts to make it an effort worth reading, and I have no history here, so I'd be a completely new writer, with no fan base to read my newest effort. Would you have the time or interest in reading a rough outline of my idea and offering input?

    3. Anonymous,

      Sure- if you have a rough outline of your fiction, send it over along with WHAT you wanted feedback specifically on (major plot, dialogue, how to make a certain scene hot) and I'd love to give you some tips! It's much easier to critique other's fiction than your own! I'm at good luck!