Hey all, thanks for all the comments on the last story, it really makes it worth it, knowing that real people are out there reading my stories!
A few of the comments wanted a cuckolding story, and there's one short story I've re-written about 6 times but just can't seem to find the right angle, so I wanted to ask the folks who like cuckolding:
1. What specifically about the fetish is the most fun for you? What I want to know is the EMOTION you either want to feel as a reader, or the EMOTION you'd want the main characters to feel, not plot stuff (I can do the plot part easily, once I know the emotions). I know what's fun for me, but seeing the group consensus on what's fun for you might help me get this story past the finish line.
2. Anything you've NEVER seen done in a cuckolding story that you've always wanted to see done? (This would be the plot or even emotional stuff.)
Thanks to those that asked about sponsorship, but at this point in my life/career, I'm only writing stories that I personally find fun and wouldn't exist in the world if I didn't write them, so while I greatly appreciate the offer, sponsorship wouldn't make any difference.
Just doing this for the love of the game, so if you enjoy the output, then comments or the buy me a coffee link for a $1 tip is all I ask!
Let me know what you all like (or even dislike) about the cuck fetish, and I'll see if any of that fits into the story I'm trying to finish! (No promises.)
Thanks!
PFD
Hey Dee! I’ve commented asking for a cuckolding story for some time now, so great to see the engagement! I’m more on the dominant side myself, and I very much enjoy seeing stories about dominant women and their bulls emasculating their more submissive husbands. Emotionally, I think it’s a lot of the humiliation for the poor emasculated cucks (having their manhood stripped away through cock comparisons, chastity, watching their wives taken in front of them by more alpha men, clean up, and perhaps even having to service the bulls). I think it makes for an extremely emotionally charged scene as it establishes extremely firm power dynamics (the empowered wife and bull at the top with the cuck at the bottom) and allows the cucks to embrace their submission in that environment and thorough humiliation. The denial aspect as well for them is enticing as they have to watch what they can’t have and the wife feeling desired and powerful.
ReplyDeleteNow, as far as content, I think you were going down a VERY interesting path with the Butterfly Beach story. It’s your canvas, so paint away maestro, but if I had my druthers, I’d see the husband character (Peter) have to face the “horrible” realization that he wants his wife Clara to cuckold him with some hung studs and have to beg the bulls to fuck his wife. I’d probably amp up the humiliation, probably with a ceremony where Barbara, the MILF friend character, down sizes his cock cage to a button cage in front of Clara and Kate (his daughter) before the bulls have their fun. I’d have Barbara position him underneath so he has to watch while they fuck Clara and make him have to clean the cum in a very humiliating way (off her ass, or fed to him by Barbara to make sure he has gets all of it). Can make this more humiliating by Barbara making him make eye contact with Clara and perhaps even the bulls while he does it.
Now, for a new idea in cuckolding, I’d very much enjoy a medical scene of some kind. I’ve toyed with the idea in the past of a submissive cuck whose wife is a doctor and all her nursing staff are younger women (perhaps some Asian, some white). He’s forced to get a check up by the nurses where his wife reveals his tiny cock to the nurses with plenty of mocking, and he’s strapped down and forced to watch while his wife’s bull (someone humiliating from his life, perhaps his boss or even his wife’s boss) fucks her as he’s cuck sat by the nurses. I’ve also played around with an idea where the cuck is infertile and can’t get his wife pregnant, and the same scene plays out with the bull filling in for him. Can also do this for a younger man who has to go to the doctor for a physical and the female doctor decides to humiliate him.
One other idea that I’ve never seen done is more of a family cuckolding. Perhaps the cuck is cuckolded by both his wife and his stepdaughter. I’ve played around with this idea where the husband lusts after his stepdaughter only to be found out and properly put in his place by both his wife and the stepdaughter (both were Asian in my story). Can amp this up with the ladies getting both taken by the same bull while poor cucky has to watch. Can even have them give the cuck’s chastity key to the bull.
Hope this helps! As you can see, I have hundreds of ideas for cuckold stories, so would like to see you bring this to fruition!
Big supporter of this! All could do story where Willy wanker clinic is worked into the medical scene. Also a big fan of forced bi, with the cucks humiliated by having to clean up cum and perhaps lick the balls of the bull to emasculate them by the doctor/nurses.
DeleteTop Anon, thanks for all those ideas, that's the emotional charge I was looking for!
DeleteI think the future story has some of that, although I prefer gentle humiliation to hard core emasuclating, and might have it come more from the loving wife than the random bull. I think you have to know the bull really well before it's hot for him to emasculate the hubby.
I do plan to finish Butterfly Beach SOMEDAY (maybe over the winter holidays), and you're pretty close in predicting the next chapter which will be mainly cuckolding between Clara and Peter.
I've never looked into Asian cuckolding before, but reading reddit, there seems to be the same jump up in awe and cock size between white men to black men, as from asian men to white men. I've seen BWC thrown out a lot, but never played with it. Is there anything else in the BWC/ Asian couple cuckolding space that I should know about? Any themes to include or avoid?
Obviously BBC in America is intertwined with our problematic founding history, which any author has to be careful to avoid, to keep things hot and not political.
Stepdaughter cucking is very hot, I should do more stories about that. Thanks again for all the ideas!
Excellent! Great to see the engagement Dee! Big supporter of your work, and i know you’ll do a great job with this.
DeleteTotally get your comment on the humiliation coming from the loving life vs. the bull. That being said, if it’s the wife’s regular bull, it makes it all the more humiliating, particularly if it’s someone in the regular life of the cuck and wife, such as the wife’s boss, the cuck’s boss, the wife’s doctor, the cuck’s friend or competitive rival, etc. These bulls often know exactly what knobs to twist to emasculate the cuck, and frankly, the wife enjoys the humiliation experienced by her husband even more when he’s being emasculated by someone with some status above her husband while she’s being desired and chosen by the more alpha man. Imagine if the man fucking your wife also holds your chastity key, and you have to see him everyday and ask for it back?
As far as Asian/BWC cuckolding, there’s so much to explore! You should check out red jade resort: https://archiveofourown.org/works/35134129/chapters/87528409. The basic premise is one you’re familiar with. An Asian couple, Asian man and Asian wife, go to a resort dedicated to cuckolding Asian men and empowering Asian women. The Asian men are all put in chastity cages and forced to serve their wives and the white bulls who fuck their wives. It’s an incredible story, and this theme of Asian men being put in their place for neglecting their wives and treating them poorly, while also humiliating their smaller cocks, comes up a lot. There’s so many great scenes, like when the main character, an Asian man, is made to put sunscreen on his wife’s bull’s cock while his wife and her friend look on and laugh, or when the bull slaps his cock on his face before fucking his wife’s ass for the first time in front of him. Great themes to explore!
The part of cuckolding I don't like is if they are married. I tend to read cuckolding stories if they have themes of chastity in them as well.
ReplyDeleteBut an idea I had floating around in my head about a guy that gets locked in chastity by his mother for his failing grades in his last year of high school, and his sister "helps" him out to sexually satisfy his girlfriend while he works on getting his grades in a good enough state to make sure he gets enough credits to graduate on time.
This could be interesting lesbian cuckolding
DeleteThere are for sure different types of cucking, but a central theme is losing your loved one to someone more powerful. I definitely get that 40% of readers don't like losing a wife, that seems too emotional, but it seems like losing a girlfriend to a sister while you're locked is much more widely accepted.
DeleteI do enjoy the married cucking- if the relationship is strong and the wife always returns, happy and freshly fucked, to the hubby, then I think it's okay. But I can definitely see why some folks might not like it.
Lesbian cucking is a hot sub-sub niche that I don't see used much at all- if you like that sort of thing there's a great (now abandoned) tumblr called Ask Agni where she locks so many boys and sometimes steals their girls too: https://askagni.tumblr.com/archive
First of all, it’s great that your enthusiasm for writing is still going strong.
ReplyDeleteI think combining the Cuckold and Willy Wanker Clinic storylines could be very creative; after all, the women would still be the ones in control. It would also be great to add a bit of public humiliation for instance, you could visit an adult shop as a couple and ask the salespeople questions like, "Hello, could I see the smallest cage you have? We've been looking for a long time, but there's still room left in my husband's cage, and I don't want that."
Also, please continue the Miranda’s Clinic and Cocksitter Club series I’m a huge fan of them.
Agreed thrilled you are still going Dee, I hold out hope we can get a other Patreon for you one day.
DeleteFrankly cuckolding is not my thing however the only time I liked it and it really turned my on was for "Miranda’s Willy Wanker Clinic 4/5: Play Ball!" with the two lesbians and the marriage chastity scene, gym girl loved this.
Something like this would be fun or perhaps the lesbian girlfriend is the dr or nurse....
Otherwise hmm if you when the MILF route what about the sexy mommies new girlfriend sightly different however could be interesting as they blue balls him, supervise his orgasm and humiliated him...
again doctor idea they could work at a 501 clinic, also idea the penis shrinking if he was hung like a horse to make it more frustrating shrinking it to a adorable little good boy nub
Totally agree on bringing Miranda’s Willy Wanker series back. Also a totally great cuckolding story line you did was the God’s at 18: Summer Break story line with Miranda’s husband Josh cuckolding Don by fucking his wife. Would love to see more of that. Perhaps with the women all watching Don’s emasculation/cuckolding with a brutal cock comparison between Don and Josh and Don being cuck sat by Miranda again.
ReplyDeleteCould do one where the cucks are Willy wankered with the bulls allowed to keep stroking as they wish and fucking Miranda and the other ladies of the clinic at their wish.
DeleteI like the relationship cuckolding themes most of all, so married couple or boyfriend/girlfriend. Could be hot to do a MILF helps her son’s girlfriend to cuckold him after she exposed his small cock.
ReplyDeleteI’ll speak for those who are not into cuck stories. I prefer the feelings of being trapped & denied & punished & exposed that come through in your stories. I’d encourage you to keep the core themes of unable to cum (magic or cage), lots of teasing, spanking, ball slaps & being forced to show off in public either naked or in only a tight thong. The tension works best when there is the torment of hope. The blue balled boy kept believing he might get relief or even sex eventually. But never comes (in both senses).
ReplyDeleteLesbian cuckolding, teasing humiliation, what you cant have, what you want
ReplyDeleteOlder women way out of your league-
love you Dee
A unique emotional dynamic I've seen played with but never fully incorporated into a story is one where the cuck is forced to "brag" about his inadequacies. "I want to hear how happy you sound, when you tell those girls that you have to stay locked because you cum too fast" kind of thing. Where the keyholder encourages the cuck to actually embrace those complex feelings. Seems like a really interesting blend of humiliation and support. I've never loved cuck stories where the hotwife comes across as CRUEL-- there's lots of room to play with sph or whatever but the best ones IMO are those where the wife/partner is doing it because she knows the guy likes it and is just seeing how far she can push him.
ReplyDeleteI anticipate that you might think it's boring to revisit old ideas but I also do have to agree with the people suggesting a Willy Wanker story. That type of dynamic could be really interesting. I can also see the perspective from some people that a conventional husband/wife dynamic could be overdone. So my pitch in a WW setting would be a daughter escorting her dad to the clinic because she doesn't want him getting off while she and her boyfriend are fooling around, and in order for the procedure to work he has to reveal a lot of embarrassing feelings while she's present in the room. And obviously the slow reveal could be that she's really into it and looking forward to frustrating him further.
Id love to see more lesbian cuckolding! Some other commenters already mentioned this idea but mother-son cucking is such an unexplored but hot niche! A milfy mol stealing her son’s girlfriend and emasculating him is something id love to see you write
ReplyDeleteThat could be interesting perhaps the gf brings the son in for a 501 and his mommy is the sexy Dr to his surprise and horror or bratty nurse sister...
DeleteThe thing that often turns me off of these stories is the cruelty. The best ones are those where the cuck and the partner both acknowledge that the cuck enjoys it, but the partner is pushing his boundaries. An element I've seen played with is the embracing of positivity that combines really well with humiliation -- "go tell those girls how happy it makes you when _____; and I'd better believe you when you say it!" Could be a fun dynamic in a story. Any situation where the sub is being encouraged to admit fantasies that he's embarrassed to share is great IMO. Also lots of opportunities to do cuck stories that aren't just husband/wife.
ReplyDeleteMight seem boring to retread old ground but I have to agree with some other commenters, that a Willy Wanker story could provide a really interesting framework. My pitch in order to combine all of these-- a daughter brings her daddy to get a 501, because she doesn't want him getting off while she's with her boyfriend in the same house. Daddy is trying to be supportive to make sure she feels comfortable with her sexuality but then is slowly forced during the procedure to admit how frustrating he'll find it to know she's getting fucked just next door to his bedroom. And of course it turns out that she really enjoys his frustration and is looking forward to giving him little peeks as long as he's open with her.
In "Emergency situation", I loved the last part where Billy got cucked by his mom. I would like if that story gets expanded upon, I want to see more of Billy living with his mother and sister, bringing home strangers to fuck, whenever they want.
ReplyDeleteOne of the best stories ever fyi "Emergency situation"
Deleteooooooo what about Julie and Ada from "Liam's Orgasm-Free Life" there was some interesting snips in there when Julie starts researching
ReplyDeleteYes yes !!!! love this idea
DeleteA setting could be unfair swinging, where one guy provides oral only. He also shares a bed with both woman, and they banter over how it was. Also while making sure he doesn't get himself off, they both need a desperate cuddle partner.
ReplyDeleteTo answer more directly: my preference is an emphasis on the dialog of everyone involved amused by the unfairness.
DeleteMy personal opinion is that anyone can craft fun scenarios. It's the dialog that sets pfdee apart.
Agreed perhaps you could use that to write some mini embarrassing stories about boys being caught like with the games girls play or Jessica bring troy in without his knowledge of the 501, then the train conversation, that was brilliant
DeleteA lot of people asking for more Miranda stuff, but I do think you milked the concept pretty far already, so I understand if you're struggling to think of more scenarios. I would say if people really want more of that, and you're interested in trying to give it to them, I think you could maybe shift the focus.
ReplyDeleteAside from the chastity fetish, the big "action" of the Procedure stories is the "procedure" itself. Kind of like how a lot of hypnodomme stories, the real "meat" of the story is the hypnosis process, whatever else the story has going on. I've read a few of those where the story is like twelve pages long, and nine pages of it are just dedicated to the hypnosis process, without anything physical even happening.
So, perhaps lean into the broader idea of a "Clinic". Consider coming up with other Procedures. Instead of just anti-touch shields, maybe Miranda (or some other nurses, maybe one of Miranda's proteges, opens up another clinic of her own, or maybe Miranda isn't related at all) could expand business into other effects.
Dealing with runaway magic medical problems (sort of like Emergency Procedure, but maybe relating to other side effects). Or a Clinic that specializes in Feminization/Futazation. Or a Clinic that specializes in Fetish Adjustment (giving guys fetishes their women want them to have, or as some kind of prank, or punishment condition). Or it could even be the opening of a facility where freshly awakened mages are allowed to practice on freshly Willied boys for specialty training. Or whatever. The point is, blushing guys getting dragged into facilities for sly hot clinicians to do procedures on them.
Personally, I'm fine if you never write another Clinic story, Miranda's was probably your single best work in the Powers setting, and it would be very hard to top. But if you were interested in continuing something thematically similar, that could be a way to do it.
What about something like in 'emergency' with magical word spell something like that
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