Sunday, February 16, 2020

One of my stories... is becoming REAL?

Some of you know that I've been writing on Patreon this last year, and my first Patreon story ever was "Lease To Own", about an unlucky college boy who finds a room to rent with 3 hot, flirty, and horny female students on ONE condition- that 'to make them feel safe at home', he has to wear a chastity belt 24/7, with only supervised releases, all in front of his three hot roommates!



So that story was published about 1 year ago.  And just last week, I got the following comment on my Patreon (reader's words in RED, my thoughts in black):

"Okay, PFD, I'm gonna bust myself here... But thought you'd like to know...
I sent this story to two girls I know, roomies... (I apologize if that's frowned upon)
But, they are "roomies with benefits"... One is very submissive, the other girl is more the leader-type..
And the submissive girl has a BF that visits on weekends....
After reading your story, ~now~ he's a BF sporting a chastity cage, a "Holy Trainer" knock-off..."

This is epic. Obviously these girls were playing dom/sub games before, but to think that maybe my little story pushed them over the edge to locking up their boyfriends cock... HOT!

"As if that wasn't amusing enough..the best part is....
The subbie girl also now has a "Whiteboard".... Right there on the wall...
Updated by her roomie.... Chores... Days til next O.. Days since last O... All of it...
All thanks to ~you~, Sir... Brilliant!
You. Are. Genius..... Best. Dollar. Spent. EVER..... LOL :-)

So that's a direct scene from 'Lease To Own', where the roommates have a 'chore board' in the kitchen, and in addition to names for 'emptying the dishwasher' and 'taking out the trash', I thought it would be hot if the girls tracked our poor boy's 'Days since last orgasm, 'Days until next orgasm' and 'Girl responsible for giving boy his next orgasm'-


And now that idea might have become real in one college apartment?  NO WAY.  

Sounds too good to be true, but the poster Barry ends with:

"And yes, serious as a heart attack with this... And thought you'd like to know... ;-) "

So there we have it. 

One slice of a silly fictional story I wrote, now possibly being done in REAL life, by two college girls?  Do we believe this?

A lot of things on the internet are fake, but I choose to believe this, because it makes me smile and my life a little better whenever I think about it.  

Thanks for the comment, Barry!

(And FYI, I'm about halfway done with my next Patreon story right now, 'Brazilian Blue Ball Soccer Academy', which should be out sometime in March.  

For a $1 pledge you can read it on my Patreon when it comes out.  Hopefully not a lot of people start acting THIS story out in real life, withholding orgasms from their boyfriends until they score goals in international soccer competitions, or we're going to have a LOT of helpless horny boys out there: 



A Missed Connection- Please Try Sending Your Story Again!

One of my long-standing offers is that any budding femdom author can email me for feedback on their short story, or tips on how to make a scene hotter, or how to self-publish to Amazon or Smashwords, etc.  Over the years, maybe 2-3 people have taken advantage of this, which is fine. 

But recently, someone tried to email their story to me, and when I tried to respond, their email address didn't work anymore!  It totally, like, couldn't accept incoming messages at all!

So ba****@b**************.com, if you're out there, try sending me your 12,004 word story for review again!  This time let's use my NEW email address, pfdeee@gmail.com (the extra 'e' is for 'erotic') and see if that works!  And check to see if you can accept incoming emails, to be able to get my review back!

And this offer stands for any other new femdom authors out there too- as long as your story doesn't contain any illegal stuff (underage characters, snuff, etc.) and you wanted some feedback on if scenes work, or how to make it hotter, feel free to email me, and I'll try to help, no matter how out there it is!




Stay frosty,
PFD