(Author's note: Every now and then I'll read a story somewhere else with a great premise that I just have to rewrite in my style for practice and that happened today with this story on Literotica called "Birthday Tickle Surprise": https://www.literotica.com/s/birthday-tickle-surprise
It's a great premise, it's where I got all the names and characters for this story, you should definitely give that author some love if that's your thing.
But it inspired me to rewrite the story in my own style, just as a writing exercise, and below is the result. Hope you like it, give that author some good comments if you read their work on Literotica. All characters below are somehow over 18. Enjoy!)
BIRTHDAY TICKLE SURPRISE
For my daughter Emma's 18th birthday I arranged for my friend Bridgette to "volunteer" her college aged-son Dan to be tickled by Emma, her two best friends Steph and Izzy, and Dan's little sisters Megan and Jean. Of course, Dan's mother Bridgette and I would be there 'to supervise' too.
What I didn't tell anyone is that a month before the date I had secretly spotted Dan sunbathing totally nude in his fenced in backyard when his family was away (such a naughty boy!) and while I took notice from my bedroom that Dan was a fit, attractive, lean, good looking boy-
-he also had absolutely the cutest and smallest hard little penis I had EVER seen on a grown boy.
And I knew he kept it totally shaved!
Emma was going to LOVE tickling that.
As an added bonus I also knew that Dan came VERY quickly, because I had watched him try to resist jerking off that hard little cock while laying there, blushing and nude in his backyard, but as soon as he had given in and started-
-our cute little Dan was an under minute man, even with his own hand!
And if anything, that just made him even cuter.
So I told his mother Bridgette and it was all arranged without Dan's consent.
And so when Steph and Izzy walked Emma down to our finished rec room we all shouted 'Surprise!' and then I pulled the sheet off the table to reveal a blushing, boxer-brief wearing Dan, tied down wrist and ankle, to our heavy dinning room table!
"Mom, what IS this?!" Emma howled, looking down at the blushing, tied down underwear clad college boy!
"It's your birthday present, Silly. My friend Bridgette said her son Dan would LOVE to let you and your friends tickle him!"
"I don't remember- saying that!" Dan gulped, blushing harder!
Dan was 20 and the only boy there. And was already starting to sweat!
As far as I knew from Bridgette, Dan had never had a girlfriend. My Emma was the head cheerleader at her high school and we couldn't KEEP the boys away from her.
His mother laughed! "Oh? Should I tell the group what you DID agree to, to get yourself into this stupid position?"
Dan was stretched out with his arms tight over his head and his feet tight to opposite corners of the long table. He blushed even harder at that! "No! Mom- don't-"
"I told Dan that Emma had ASKED for him specifically," his mother said, making him blush even harder and the girls laugh. "That for her birthday... she wanted him showered, shaved and tied down... so she could practice kissing him all over to get ready for college- and so she could give a cute safe college boy her first blowjob!"
"OH MY GOD- AS IF!" Emma laughed, her hot cheerleader friends and Dan's sisters howling too!
"This wouldn't be her first, not by a LONG shot!" Izzy told the group, then looked at me. "Sorry Mrs. Baker."
I laughed. "No, I know how Emma is."
"Gee thanks Mom."
I picked up a shoebox. "But that's NOT what we're here for- we're here for Emma's fun, with these!"
And I opened the box to show Emma and her friends the vast array of tickle torture devices I had assembled for the night. Feathers, toothbrushes, paintbrushes, extensions that snapped on to your nails- I had them all!
Emma laughed and grabbed the nail extensions and went right to Dan's smooth shaved armpits and dug her fingers into them.
A surprised Dan almost JUMPED right off the table, straining against his bonds and laughing!
"GHGHH! NOOOOOO!!"
"Ooooh, SOMEONE'S VERY ticklish," my daughter giggled, then going in even more intensely!
Dan was LAUGHING, straining, SQUIRMING on the table trying to get away-
"NOOOO HAHH-HAAHH- STOPPP!"
But I had tied him down VERY tight.
For his 'blowjob'.
For a while we stood and all watched as Emma fulfilled one of her ultimate fantasies.
I knew because I had overheard her telling her friends about it. And the girls lamenting how high school boys were too 'lame' and self-conscious to ever let them try it.
Soon Emma's friends Steph and Izzy joined in, tickling with bare fingers on Dan's skin, the older college boy begging these giggling high school girls to stop.
And after a few short minutes, they did!
Because under his tight boxer briefs-
-Dan's cute little three and a half inch cock was very obviously hard.
"Oh my god he LIKES IT!" Emma howled, pointing right at it, but not touching it, with her long fake press on tickling nail!
"He LOVES it," Izzy agreed. "The perv!"
The blushing helpless tied down college boy could barely speak!
"NO! No- I- DON'T-"
The high school girls laughed, teased him verbally, about what they thought was his growing hard-on but what I knew was his FULL hard-on, but didn't seem to know what to do after that!
And this was where mothers came in.
I pulled out my scissors. "May I?"
"NO!" Dan begged.
"Go ahead," his mother Bridgette laughed. "That's why he's here."
And I cut two lines up his boxer briefs and dramatically pulled them away to reveal his aching, towering, massive-
-three and a half inch penis.
"OH MY GOD he's HUNG like a BABY!" Emma was howling, holding her stomach!
"Is that a REAL DICK?!" Izzy laughed, putting her fingers next to it to measure it, but still not touching it! "It CAN'T be!"
"It's- TINY!" Steph agreed, as the college boy gasped and tried to breathe!
But his younger sisters were even more brutal.
"Oh my god Dan THAT'S what Jean and I hear you jerking every night in your ROOM?!" his sister Meghan howled! "That's BARELY a COCK!"
"You really should just put on panties and become a girl," Jean agreed, taking a picture!
This cute boy was totally shaved and now totally naked and totally at our mercy, his cute little cock SO hard even as his face was BRIGHT red.
"NO! STOP- LOOKING! LET ME GO!"
And now I pulled out my phone.
"No, I don't think we will. Because, you see everyone, our little Dan has the very dirty habit of sunbathing NAKED in his backyard when his mother and sisters aren't home... and jerking off his tiny little dick at the end of it!"
And I showed them the video I had 'accidentally' taken over the back of Dan's fence.
My girls were DYING.
His mother was angry.
His sisters were LAUGHING.
Dan was so shocked-
-he started to go limp!
No, that wouldn't do.
I started handing feathers to everyone.
"And since Dan LOVES being naked and debasing himself in that way, I think what he's going to AGREE to let us do now is... tickle him as LONG as we want, in exchange for that video NEVER being sent to the cops? Or to ALL the girls at his school?"
Naked and tied up and helpless, the attractive boy looked at me, holding a feather near his drooping cock, and gulped!
I laughed, looking down at him.
"Twitch your cock if you agree."
And, as if it had a mind of its own-
-his cute little baby cock twitched for me, getting harder again!
Emma and her friends LAUGHED.
But Dan's little sisters laughed even HARDER.
I finished my round of handing out feathers to everyone in the room, saving the biggest, longest, sharpest feather for Emma.
Her eyes got big when I handed it to her.
"Mom... for real?"
"Go ahead, as long as you want," I laughed, stepping out of her way! I whispered into her ear. "Try it on his cock first. I think you'll find the reaction the most entertaining there."
And then my darling daughter, 4.0 GPA, head cheerleader and prom queen, soon to be going off to college and having adventures of her own-
-tickled this naked boy's hard little dick with a feather until he was SCREAMING for her to stop.
Each little tickle-
-seemed like it was ELECTROCUTING him!
My Emma was in seventh heaven.
I could see it in her face, in her rosy cheeks, in her hungry eyes as she made this naked boy regret even HAVING a penis-
And then her two friends joined in, adding even more feathers to the helpless boy's little shaft and balls, attacking in from all sides!
He was SCREAMING and trying to get away, bucking and tilting his hips. That just made it more fun for the girls. Now it was a game that required skill! And teamwork!
I looked at Bridgette-
-she nodded-
-and I tapped Dan's younger sisters, Megan and Jean, on the shoulder, and nodded toward his cock!
It only took a second for them to join in.
Dan was DYING of embarrassment, looking up at his two sister's wicked faces, as they gleefully tickle tortured his naked cock!
After some initial reluctance at doing anything to their older brother's cock-
-his sisters ended up LOVING his reactions!
What red-blooded American girl wouldn't love having a helpless naked good looking little dicked college boy tied up tightly to her dining room table, at the absolute MERCY of her long devilish feather, on his cute shaved cock and balls?
I soon learned that the answer also included his mother.
"Mind if I tickle my son for a while?" Bridgette asked me. "Just for fun?"
I laughed! "Fine by ME- but you'd have to ask Emma- it's HER present!"
My gracious daughter giggled, and handed over her own feather! "Sure Mrs. Stevens, go crazy! You brought him into this world after all."
"That I did," she laughed, accepting the feather, and then standing over her naked son with it in hand! She looked down at his red, hard, leaking throbbing 'manhood'. "And his penis looked about the same back then."
The girls LAUGHED out loud, at this horribly blushing boy and his tiny little cock!
By this point Dan had been being tickled for about fifteen solid minutes.
He was sweaty.
He was gasping for air.
He was desperate to cum, with a LAKE of pre-cum glistening on his abs!
And his little dick was going soft.
His mother laughed, slowly dragging her feather up the sides of his leg towards his dick!
"Poor boy, your hard-on muscles couldn't take being used for this long?"
"Probably because he's used to to cumming too fast," I chuckled, having taken over the filming duties from Bridgette.
"It takes him under a minute," his sister Jean giggled. "I timed it."
"Me too!" I said, making the girls laugh!
"Yes, after having seen two or three of his little 'adventure' videos," his mother said, "I ordered him a steel chastity cage. For the rest of the summer while he's staying with us... I don't think our little Dan will be cumming much at ALL."
The boy sweated, as his mother's feather slowly approached his mostly soft cock!
"M-MOM! P-please! It's- not right- for YOU to-"
"Hush dear. If I want your opinion... I'll tickle it out of you."
And she began.
Bridgette tickled her son's feet and armpits and bellybutton with fingers and her feather, making him jump.
But she knew he was really ticklish on his cock and balls.
And she left those for last.
Slowly building, with a masterful ramp up in tension, Bridgette tickled her son within an INCH of his life, constantly circling closer towards his smooth cock and balls-
-which started showing signs of a reaction.
Dan was getting hard again.
"There we go you little pervert... get hard for Mommy," she laughed.
And that only made him stiffer!
And the girls laugh harder!
Only when he was FULLY stiff again-
-all towering, impressive, three and a half inches-
-did Bridgette start in on his cock. With TWO feathers, one borrowed from her daughter Meghan.
Dan EXPLODED in laughter.
He was PULLING at his restraints, trying to get away.
Dan was BEGGING her to stop.
And like any good mother, she didn't.
Soon, Jody, and Steph and Izzy and Meghan and Emma joined back in too. The only one not tickling Dan was me, who was filming it for posterity.
His poor little cock was in a WHIRLWIND of feathers, attacking him from EVERY side.
He was SCREAMING, nearly hyper-ventilating!
I noticed his little sisters Meghan and Jean loved tickling that most-sensitive million-dollar spot on the underside of Dan's uncut cockhead, since that got the BIGGEST reaction out of him. Their feathers were FIGHTING for space in that little spot, like two hockey players both going for the puck!
Dan was BEGGING for space, for air, for mercy!
But after another few minutes, he was begging for something else.
"Mom- MOM- you better stop!" Dan cried, bucking his hips!
"Aww, too much for you? You can't handle a tickling from Mommy?"
"Oh my God he's gonna cum!" Emma shouted, pointing!
"No he's not," I laughed, tickling his cute feet with one hand while I filmed with the other, loving how he squirmed! "Everyone get ready to stop when I tell you. We'll have him tip over the edge totally untouched. That's called a ruined orgasm, Emma."
"Yeah Mom I KNOW."
"What?! NOO!" Dan begged.
But we had the feathers.
The others laughed as they watched it happening- his face changing, as he realized the INEVITABILITY of it-
He was getting closer with every feathery brush over his cock, his neck and abs straining, his toes curling, even as he tried to fight it-
And when I saw his eyes tip over into that glassy point I knew from SO many high school handjobs-
"STOP! EVERYONE STOP!" I laughed.
Bridgette stopped and looked at her son's crotch, as did everyone else.
His little untouched dick was-
-straining into the air!
"Awww, does getting tickled by your own mother and sisters turn you on?" Bridgette asked as she ran her nail up and down her son's naked ribs, making him gasp and squirm! "Maybe that's the ONLY way you get to cum, after you're locked."
He was desperately trying to hold it in!
"NOOOOO- UNGGGHHH!"
"Ohmygod he can't hold it-" Emma squealed to her giggling friends and we all stood there, waiting and watching-
-until the poor boy came, helplessly, all over his naked pecs and abs, pumping HARD streams STRAIGHT up into the air, completely and totally without pleasure.
A very long hang time ruined orgasm.
"NOOOOOOO!!" Dan wailed, feeling it slip out of him, burning, unsatisfying to his blue balls!
"Tickle girls, tickle! He's the MOST sensitive right now!" I said.
The girls jumped in like a pack of hyenas. Avoiding his spurting dick and chest for now, but his armpits, his ribs, under his knees, his feet, were all fair game.
The poor boy was having a ruined orgasm AND being tickled mercilessly, which helped extra ruin it!
"NNOOOOOOO!!! HAAAAAH-NNNGGGGHY-NOOOOOOO!"
He was BUCKING on the table, helpless, cock hard and spurting like a porn star. While being tickle tortured.
He had never looked better.
Dan was CRYING and BEGGING, his soft little dick flopping EVERYWHERE!
"NO NO NO! NOOOOO!"
We tickled him for another thirty minutes after that.
He got hard again after fifteen minutes, his helpless stiffening cock drawing the girls' feathers like bees to honey.
Bridgette cleaned the cum off his cock and balls and chest with a wet towel like he was a little baby being diaper changed, making him blush.
And then the girls jumped back in to tickle him until he was SCREAMING.
And then, at the end, when he was thoroughly broken, Bridgette untied her son's wrists and ankles from the table, bent him over it naked with his ass high in the air, and gave him a long, firm, hard hand spanking, for being such a pervert who liked jerking off outside.
Dan started to fight as the spanks got more painful but his two younger sisters happily jumped in to hold his wrists down, one on each arm, taunting their blushing older brother as he got his ass thoroughly reddened naked and up on his tiptoes, like a little boy caught stealing cookies.
Emma and her friends wanted to help with the spanking-
-it was a birthday, there should be a birthday spanking after all-
-and so only AFTER Bridgette had given him ALL she thought was appropriate for his crimes, only THEN did each of the girls get to add on their extra special birthday spanking to his already bright red ass!
I love the sight of a naked helpless little-dicked college boy with a bright red ass.
He got hard again when Emma was spanking him, all the girls noticed and so his mother had to step in again and spank him one last time until he was nice and soft.
He got hard again when his sisters were spanking him, and then again when I was spanking him, and Bridgette got fed up and got a wooden spoon from our kitchen and spanked him very hard this time, making him HOWL-
-and then put him back up on the dinner table to lock up his little cock in a VERY tiny steel chastity cage with all the girls watching and asking questions as the blushing helpless gasping boy watched his precious little dick go bye bye for the rest of the summer! And maybe longer!
Only then did Bridgette make the crying sniffling, thoroughly broken and locked boy apologize to ALL of us women individually for jerking off, not just those few times outside, but ANY time in his life-
-and promise to be on his BEST behavior for the rest of his summer break-
-AND promise to let his sisters strip and spank him for any breeches of such good behavior, ANY time they wanted.
Bridgette handed Jean the key and his sisters were put in charge of the helpless naked caged boy, his clothes, and his orgasms for the REST of the summer, making both girls get a wicked gleam in their eyes.
Emma negotiated with the girls to bring Dan around at least once a week for a 'repeat' of her birthday gift, just with no ruined orgasms but MUCH more teasing and edging next time.
"We gotta get our practice in for giving college handjobs now!" Emma laughed. "Who better to practice on than a college boy?!"
"One who doesn't have the dick of a middle schooler?" Izzy offered, making Dan gasp and blush again and all the girls laugh!
Bridgette took the very contrite (and still-naked!) locked boy off with his sisters back home, Jean and Meghan promising to send along MANY videos of a naked and caged Dan being spanked for real or made up transgressions in the coming days, and Emma declared it her best birthday ever.
Wait until she sees what I get her next year.
***THE END***